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BluesSerenade
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0 posted 2002-01-30 03:59 PM


I don't know the reasons
why or how It came to be
puzzled by the pieces
missing something, incomplete.

Water trickles down a mountain
liguid colors run in streams
interlocking jagged edges
sun kissed by the sea~

Rounded at the corners
misplaced pieces of the scenery
leaving gaps in empty spaces
of the picture I was seeing.

jigged and sawed~~

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-01-30 04:45 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...such a majestic and surreal beauty, sweet friend, I love it! (smiles) Nature has a tendency to always be branched out and put in jigsaw, and that's the miracle of beauty in the world, so we always find something new! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-30 06:26 PM


oooh my fav line.."sun kissed by the sea"

I enjoyed this very much!!

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2002-01-30 08:25 PM


Noah and Rose Petal~  
Thanks for reading my feeble attempt at putting it all together.
Seems there is always that elusive missing piece, makes you wonder if it was ever part of the picture in the first place...
I could go on and on but I won't.  
Thanks again~

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4 posted 2002-01-30 10:43 PM


Bluesy~ this is so cool!! I loved this! very well done!
BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2002-01-30 10:57 PM


Bluesy~?   Oh that is so fitting,
I'll be sure to work it into my puzzle.  
Thank you dear SEAside lady!

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6 posted 2002-01-30 11:18 PM


"interlocking jagged edges", is this my life? I like this one!

Nan

BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2002-01-30 11:55 PM


I'm determined to make those edges fit, with or without the missing piece.  
Thank you Nan~

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