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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 01-28-2002 05:53 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

it was our first time
when you were there
at the thrift shop
looking for things
for your fingers
to play with
like rings
and thimbles

you saw me
with my jutting frets
and erect demeanor
and there was something
about the dark
of my hollow
that made you point
and say
him too

you polished me after
with your hair
and blew across me
with your perfume
your fingers were cool
to my buttons
when you unstrung me
and undid my done
beside your bed

you pressed my neck
to your chest
and my frets to the sooth
of your breast space
your legs fit my indents
as you wrapped them around me
just before you reached
down to your center
you said I made you want

something for your fingers...

©Dark


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Kethry
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1 posted 01-28-2002 07:02 AM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

Dark Stranger,
its a cello right? Very well written, sensual and smooth like soft music.
Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 01-28-2002 07:06 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Perhaps it is a guitar
Either way, your music is beautiful
Liz
Tracey
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3 posted 01-28-2002 07:29 AM       View Profile for Tracey   Email Tracey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tracey

A beautiful symphony of love and desire. It practically waltzes down the page with it’s rhythm of passion.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 01-28-2002 07:54 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Ms Kethry it could be a cello, had invisioned a fine classic gibson guitar, but
when the strings are off, perhaps it doesn't matter..thank you so much

Ms Santos, yes a guitar and a woman that strums with her soul, thank you for reading and responding

Tracey, you bless me with your review
and comments, thank you much
Martie
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5 posted 01-28-2002 01:41 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

DS

I can see her dark lashes
curve against her cheek
as she slowly closes her eyes
and sitting thus
she moves back and forth
her pearls rolling across
her silken bodice
drenched by the lacey light
and a shadowed guitar.

Her mouth is a soft bow
with lips slightly parted,
her breathing fills another room
where memory is singing
and when her green eyes open
they are filled with longing.

___
Your poem took me to the memory of a poem I wrote some time ago...hope you don't mind me placing part of it here.  I love the curve of the instrament..it is sensual..as is your poem.
Canuckster
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6 posted 01-28-2002 01:47 PM       View Profile for Canuckster   Email Canuckster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Canuckster's Home Page   View IP for Canuckster

Beautiful metaphore and picture.  Hits just the right chord.

never try to teach a pig to sing
it wastes your time AND annoys the pig

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 01-28-2002 01:53 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Ms Martie...you bless me with your memory addition..and the lady there in your image is enchanting, thank you so much

Canuckster... I appreciate your review and comments.  So pleased that the image was worthy of your eyes.
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8 posted 01-28-2002 02:55 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Play me your gypsy guitar....


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 01-28-2002 03:17 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

wear my strum fingers
there
where your songs turn to sighs

thank you Lauren
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10 posted 01-28-2002 04:21 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"you said I made you want

something for your fingers..."


yes
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(sigh) Soooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, your words always shine with sheer passion and true loves magic! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
Kethry
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12 posted 01-28-2002 04:48 PM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

Dark Stranger you are right it is a guitar. I was beguiled by these lines
"your legs fit my indents
as you wrapped them around me"

Excellent write still.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


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13 posted 01-28-2002 05:16 PM       View Profile for rosepetals25   Email rosepetals25   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rosepetals25

Dark Stranger,

   I just love your writing.  There are so many lines I could never choose just one Just wonderfully erotic with some romance *sighs* Did I mention I like this?

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

BluesSerenade
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14 posted 01-28-2002 06:09 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Quite the image maker you are.
Was wondering why you came up
with the thrift shop of all places~
Stands to reason,
some of the best deals are second hands.  

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (01-28-2002 06:15 PM).]

Dark Stranger
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15 posted 01-28-2002 06:47 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Ms Kethry, upon return you bless me
with second touch, I am aroused at the review
please play this song often.

Ms Tara, you whisper secrets to my ear eyes
when you spend your time
on my humble offerings..

MsBlues...do you fit my images to your smile
do you wear them on your skin
with wicked caution?  Thank you

and thank you all
rwood
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16 posted 01-28-2002 08:07 PM       View Profile for rwood   Email rwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rwood

Gorgeous writing here..the strum of hidden music..it is there..for the right eyes to find. The right fingers perhaps.

Sincerely,
Regina
Startime
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17 posted 01-28-2002 08:15 PM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

*sigh* this poem sings sensual perfection....I saw a harp with its magical sounds that play so sweetly on the ear....BRAVO!!! This poem is magnificent...and I just love the sensual feel to it. **big hugs** Play on, dear poet.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Dark Stranger
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18 posted 01-29-2002 06:29 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms wood, I thank you for your reviews, you bless me with the gift of your eyes

ms startime, may my harp be heavenly
when it strums dream songs for you
Klassy Lassy
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19 posted 02-14-2006 03:48 AM       View Profile for Klassy Lassy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Klassy Lassy

Very sensual writing, and a beautiful metaphor of desire and passion.

I have read several of your poems now, and find myself reading again.  Your poetry is art.  And I'm still learning to read!

~ Karen ~
Dark Stranger
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20 posted 02-14-2006 07:14 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

most humble thank to you ms Klassy
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