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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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For years, I've wandered all alone lost in a mire of misconstrue under a moon that fades to dark threads of myself threaten undo. Once in a past and better time I knew my place, I felt belong but since that fateful day he left no heart in love, surroundings wrong. So long have I been half alive I cannot find where I now live under a fairy hill perhaps there must be something left to give. It seems a hand does beckon now to pull me out of darkened space A tender thought was all it took I was not lost, but just misplaced. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (01-27-2002 11:27 PM).] |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Cat.... this is such a sad write.. I hope you find happiness soon... alan |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sandra, such sadness flows from your pen, my heart goes out to you! (kiss on cheek) Very soon you will be embraced by true love and you will feel fully alive forever and alive, I just know it will happen! We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
sometimes I feel misplaced too, or even Lost, but then I just remind myself that God will get me through any obstacles! You're a talented, sweet lady sandra  RP |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
It seems a hand does beckon now to pull me out of darkened space A tender thought was all it took I was not lost, but just misplaced. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sandra, this has a positive ending to an otherwise sad piece. I do hope this is true and someone has held out a hand to you. ~Stay safe, hugs, Nancy~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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Little_White_Flowers Junior Member
since 2002-01-27
Posts 23 |
I hope you find your light sweetie i pray that love comes back to you ~~LWF~~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I feel your pain and know the feeling, but there is always something left to give if we choose to share it. I don't know what the answer is, I just keep smiling and try to make it stick. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sandra, Too cool! I'm liking the outcome of this a lot. Tell me it's true... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
The ending of this piece sounds like the beginning of something precious….I hope it is. Now you have me wondering..time for a chat...it's been awhile. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
It seems a hand does beckon now to pull me out of darkened space A tender thought was all it took I was not lost, but just misplaced. Sandra, I truly the hope the hand that beckons is taken and realized. For what it's worth...knew you weren't lost. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks everyone, for the words of encouragment. I wish there was someone special who came in at the ending, but no, I just felt like ending on a positive note. Maybe it will come to pass someday. In case you all don't know it, sometimes the hand belongs to you-my friends of passions. Sandra |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Well then...one of the hands is going to give you a bump.  |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
Very whistful. The form is excellent and shows a lot of talent. Good Job. never try to teach a pig to sing |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh well, I just love this one catalina, Just misplaced, what a sweet thought, floria Floria |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely..I like that thought of being misplaced...not lost hugs a really beautiful write Maureen |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
How can a poem be both lovely and sad? You've done well with this one, my friend. It's a keeper. Take care! Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I love the finish on this poem - sweetly hopeful |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I like the finish too, it's good to believe that isn't it Kathleen--(Kay) |
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