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Alan
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0 posted 2002-01-27 10:38 PM


You and Me
For the whole world to see
Holding hands
Making future plans
Building dreams
While drinking Irish Crème
Hearing distant bells
Wedding bells
A lifetime Guarantee
For You and Me

© alan


© Copyright 2002 Alan - All Rights Reserved
dgvarner
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1 posted 2002-01-27 10:44 PM


alans getting married???  (did everyone know this but me??)

this is the sweetest

congratulations, if they are in order!  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and i'd give up forever to touch you..cause i know you can feel me somehow..." -googoo dolls

RosePetal
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2 posted 2002-01-27 10:48 PM


I thought that you are already married..hmmmm nice poem sweetie!
your lady is a lucky lady

RP

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3 posted 2002-01-27 10:58 PM


Wow!  Romantic write here Alan.....
Give us the scoop!  Is it true?
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

Ivy Rose
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4 posted 2002-01-27 11:02 PM


Lovely poem, Alan.  Full of hope and the wonder of a new venture.  My heart is gladdened that you have found one with whom you can love and spend your life with.

***Ivy Rose

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5 posted 2002-01-27 11:18 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...this is soooooooo beautiful, are you geting married? (big hugggssssss) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we wish you the greatest happiness forever and ever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Alan
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6 posted 2002-01-27 11:21 PM


Thanks everyone for the smile. This is only something that just came to me. I have been married for 30 years this coming July... Thanks for your wonderful comments.
alan

[This message has been edited by Alan (01-27-2002 11:23 PM).]

Tracey
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7 posted 2002-01-28 07:04 AM


What lovely sentiments for the future you have penned here Alan. We don't see you posting near often enough any more.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Kethry
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8 posted 2002-01-28 07:10 AM


Alan,
I know! you are renewing your vows, it's like getting married all over again.
Beautiful song.
Kethry.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



HopeS
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9 posted 2002-01-28 07:26 AM


Romantic as always Alan but I bet Alice is breathing a sigh of relief
Hope

Alan
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10 posted 2002-01-28 07:53 AM


Tracey... thank you for taking the time to read and reply.


Alan
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11 posted 2002-01-28 07:57 AM


Kethry.. Thank you for reading this. As for a hidden meaning, it is only a poem. I wrote it in response to a challenge to write about love with out using the 4 letter word(love).

Hope. Yes she liked it. Her exact words were its beautiful. Then she went back to her movie... Thanks for responding Hope

strbbux
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12 posted 2002-01-28 10:46 AM


Sooo beautiful alan, and my wish for you is a lifetime of happiness. great poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

catalinamoon
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13 posted 2002-01-28 11:27 PM


Isn't it nice that you can still think of love in this way after being married 30 years.You have achieved something remarkable.
Sandra

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