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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-01-27 10:29 PM



Crimson Is My Name

clothes of blue
have all been shed
I bathe myself
in the color of red
I am not
a misty shade
crimson is my name
I shall not fade
waves of scarlet
burn through my soul
I am a fire
burning under control
ruby is the color
my life has exposed
a budding woman
has now become a rose


"I have already paid for all my future sins."  Sade...(King of Sorrow)

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Tim
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1 posted 2002-01-27 10:31 PM


Well written, I like muchly.
Silver Streak
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2 posted 2002-01-27 11:08 PM


1slick_lady, this is wonderful! You say it well. Thanks for sharing.   
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Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-01-29 01:17 AM


helen - and that you are, a budding rose...

BC

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4 posted 2002-01-29 01:35 AM


OneSlickLady~
One gorgeous piece of poetry from the soul~
A pure delight to read~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2002-01-29 10:06 PM


This is fantastic. Nice way to think of yourself-crimson. A nice, strong, passionate color.
Sandra

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6 posted 2002-01-29 10:10 PM


Oh this is WONDERFUL!!
Love it Helen.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Startime
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7 posted 2002-01-29 10:57 PM


A bright red rose filled with passion that is what you are ....magnificent. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2002-01-29 11:21 PM




(smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such beautiful passion and love fill your words, we all love you soooooooo much! (kiss on cheek) You are a red rose to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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