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Victoria

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0 posted 2002-01-27 04:09 PM

A mystical star glistened in the sky
but nobody noticed, except for me
upon a sentimental wintry day
I realized why only I could see
this star shining ever so faithfully

Memoirs of teardrops
in the crystals of fallen snow
reflections of love
within the stars they still glow
still written within my eyes
a quill of tears begins to flow
a signature of stars from long ago

The love I have inside
it glistens upon the sea
stars blooming in the tides
like cherry blossoms
blooming upon a tree
when I think of you
neon stardust turns to blue
teardrops fall like snowflakes
reflecting a mosaic starlight hue

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

[This message has been edited by Victoria (01-27-2002 04:11 PM).]

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

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FL, USA

1 posted 2002-01-27 04:13 PM

You bring a galactic blizzard with this one, Vic. Verry. very beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

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2 posted 2002-01-27 04:56 PM

Lovely thoughts for January, Victoria, very visual read.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

RosePetal

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South Florida

3 posted 2002-01-27 05:01 PM

Simply beautiful Victoria!!!

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-01-27 05:01 PM

This poem made me think of a movie I just watched called "A Walk To Remember"...an awesome heartouching movie about love and stars and loss and teardrops...James

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

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Michigan

5 posted 2002-01-27 05:11 PM

neon stardust turns to blue
teardrops fall like snowflakes
reflecting a mosaic starlight hue

I just love this imagery, Victoria...
You used some very beautiful words and strung them together like a mantle of snow!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Chelsea~
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6 posted 2002-01-27 05:57 PM

victoria,

You use this
theme well, it's
sadly beautiful

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-01-27 06:12 PM

(smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, ooohhhhhh...I love the cherry blossom analogy, this is soooooooo heavenly! (kiss on cheek) May your love forever blossom like this and fill youw ith joy, sweet friend, I love it!!! We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton

8 posted 2002-01-27 06:23 PM

This is a very beautiful write...well done!!

Nathan

strbbux
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9 posted 2002-01-27 08:55 PM

My but these words are beautiful Victoria
"
Memoirs of teardrops
in the crystals of fallen snow
reflections of love
within the stars they still glow " I just love this, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2002-01-27 08:59 PM

Victoria~ I just love this piece. Very well done with beautiful imagery.
*thanks for stopping by my site today*

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

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11 posted 2002-01-27 10:07 PM

Thank you Newell..pleased you enjoyed

kathleen..thank you for the pretty rose..mmmm
smells so good ha..

joanna..thank you for peeking in hugss

madame..thank you so much..glad you enjoyed madame

noah..

nathan..thank you ..nice of you to say..

floria..so pleased you enjoyed..hugss

nancy..thank you so much..yes i enjoyed your lovely site..

catalinamoon

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The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2002-01-27 11:19 PM

Me too, Vic. You always say it so eloquently.
Sandra

N orth Carolina Girl
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13 posted 2002-01-28 10:35 AM

Victoria,some very lovely images.I enjoyed this!

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Alan
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right next door

14 posted 2002-01-28 10:52 AM

Victoria... This is a beautiful read...
alan

mauddib
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Posts 119
melbourne australia

15 posted 2002-01-28 11:40 AM

Among the bric a brac, yours stood out like bright colored candy, I just had to take a look, and being a chocaholic, I bought every box in the store.
Very good imagery Victoria, you took me with you

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

16 posted 2002-01-28 12:12 PM

beautiful..I think in a day or two our beautiful 70 degree weather is going to turn to sleet or snow again..either way I love the thoughts you expressed ~V

hugs
M

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

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Texas, USA

17 posted 2002-01-28 12:57 PM

Simply lovely.

Nan

Canuckster
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New Mexico, USA

18 posted 2002-01-28 02:08 PM

Beautiful images and very deep expressions in here. Well done.

never try to teach a pig to sing
it wastes your time AND annoys the pig

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

19 posted 2002-01-28 04:59 PM

~V~

I really felt this, and how lovely your words are....amazing my friend..

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

20 posted 2002-01-28 05:24 PM

sandra...thank you so much..glad you enjoyed

juania...thank you..love your animation..hugs

alan..thank you for peeking in alan..

Mauddib..thank you for your nice comments..glad you enjoyed

M..thank you maureen, its 70 here and suppose to maybe snow on wed..

nan..thank you very much..glad you liked

canuckster..thank you so much...

lauren..thanks lauren ..nice of you to say

insect
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