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The Scream
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The Scream |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Frothing seas bellow at beaten coasts Tormented skies swirl in certain scapes... Gaunt soul screams, permeates the silence gelid hands press the oral tissues mystery cloaks what Munch saw swayed subject in odd proportions created an unreal image for me and yet artists' brush strokes insist... recurrent subjects persist affliction turns to obsession black predominates scenes cloaked in misery silent screams haunt canvases welcome to tormented skies swirling seas strange cloaked appearances and unworldy disappearances. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-27-2002 01:06 AM).] |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Taking a sojourn through the dark side tonight I see. You have created an effective mood, enjoyed your poem. |
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mauddib Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 119melbourne australia |
Ouch! |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
What a stormy write. Dark, yet beautiful. Well done, sir!! Just believe... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
As the storm closes in... the gulls scream in echo of the storm's fury. Wow vivid write. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
as always, vividly intense poetry...... i hope you have a painting to go with this one.....  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
vivid and screaming!Harry Potter step aside!! |
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