Dear Valentine (Paula Finn's Challenge)

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RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

0 posted 2002-01-26 07:14 PM

Dear Valentine, Please don't buy me chocolate
It will only make me gain weight
Please don't get me balloons
For shortly they'll deflate

Roses are triditional
but in two days they'll die
Honey, all I need is your love
And on that alone I'll get by

What I really would like though
Is for you to sing me a song
As long as it's from your heart
You could never go wrong

If you rather not sing
I'd love to receive a poem
Baby, your heart is my treasure
I vow to love as my own

Make a toast with me
With a little red red wine
Kiss and serenade me
I love you Valentine!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-01-26 08:01 PM

Ah Joanna! This is so sweet and I hope your Valentine reads it!

I'm sure he will sing to you! Paula's Challenge well met here!
~Hugs sweetie, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-26 08:55 PM

(showers you with kisses) Ooohhhhhhhhh...oh my gosh, this is soooooooooooo beautiful, this is by far my favorite of yours yet, I am soooooo happy to be your Valentine and I will always love you and I dream of serenading you and giving you all your heart desires! (kiss on lips) I love you, my sweet Guinevere!!! (kiss on lips) You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

3 posted 2002-01-26 08:59 PM

A perfect Valentine!

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2002-01-26 09:13 PM

Im sure he will love it Joanna..always nice to have someone special on valentines day..hugss

~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2002-01-26 10:01 PM

Awesome, Joanna! Love endures long after the ballons have deflated and the chocolate has transformed itself into pounds...the perfect gift

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-01-26 10:31 PM

Oh Joanna, a song, a poem and some red wine, I would take that anytime in place of a box of chocolates. Nice poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-01-26 11:07 PM

Yep...I think you will get all of the things
that you are wishing for...Nice write RP..
And I agree. Chocolates are fattening...
I usually get a card...but the cardboard is
a little hard to digest...

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2002-01-27 02:45 AM

LOL at Magnus cardboard reply.
RosePetal, I sure hope you get your heart's desire for Valentine's Day. It's a sweetheart of a poem.

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

9 posted 2002-01-27 04:54 AM

challenge well met I would say.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2002-01-27 10:11 AM

Awwwww....what a valentine....betting he comes through...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-27-2002 10:12 AM).]

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

11 posted 2002-01-27 11:21 PM

Joanna darling girl utterly utterly wonderful this has got to be your best yet. And yes darling girl I’m sure you’ll get a song and a poem and lots of love. And you deserve it darling girl isn’t love wonderful? Mmmmmmmm it is and I’m so happy to see you soooooooo full of love. It’s amazing how transforming love can be.

Wonderful writing from you darling heart I’d say challenge met and matched

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

12 posted 2002-02-10 09:05 PM

if i could play my guitar
a song for you i would sing
if i could use my right hand
a poem for you would be my thing
but alas my love
is all i give
but it will be around
long as you live
so i write this poem
as a reply and to say
i am sending you my love
this valentines day...

love ya
jesse

So tonight I'll ask
The stars above
"How can I ever win your love?"
What can I do,
What can I say
To turn your angel eyes my way...

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

13 posted 2002-02-11 03:07 PM

Thank you all! I wish everyone a happy and cuddly valentines day!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

14 posted 2002-02-13 05:04 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...I just had to find this to ring in Valentines Day, I LOVE YOU MY SWEET JOANNA!!! (kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss

I love you...my sweet Guinevere!

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

15 posted 2002-02-13 05:21 PM

To the tune of Mary had a little lamb.

Joanna has a sweet, sweet smile
Her joy is fun, I know
And every where her music plays
All beauty is aglow.

This is a song for you. But it is also a poem.

Happy Valentine's day, Joanna.

((Joanna))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

16 posted 2002-02-13 05:28 PM

I hope you get your serenade. It sounds delightful.

Nan

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

17 posted 2002-02-13 05:35 PM

O solo mio ...
Oh, well ...

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

18 posted 2002-02-13 10:42 PM

Yes, you have described a wonderful valentine..a beautiful poem or song.
Sandra

See me?
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since 2002-02-13

Posts 93
UK

19 posted 2002-02-17 05:51 AM

what can i say you sum it all up. who needs possessions? great poem.

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

20 posted 2002-02-17 03:08 PM

Thanks a bunch everyone

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