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Chrissy
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 81
Idaho, no I am not a farmer!

0 posted 2002-01-28 12:46 PM

Why do I feel like I have nowhere to turn
Why does this feeling inside of me burn
The desire I have for you is never ending
But for some reason that's not the messgae I'm sending

I want to be with you more and more each day
But inside there is something keeping me away
I do not know exactly how you feel
I am not you, I don't know how you normally deal

We both live our lives, each and every day
But I feel like I am going crazy and can't find a way
To tell you I want to be with you more and more
To spend each day by your side, this shouldn't be a chore

I know there are some diferences, that we must overcome
Just snap your fingers and It will be done
unless you just want to say goodbye
Otherwise I will keep my promise and try

It seems strange to me, to feel this way
But I think about you more each day
I want you to tell me that you will take my hand
Because for once, I finally understand

That I do not get everything I want
That what I need inside I have now caught
I want to spend my life like in a fairytale land
Only with you, so please take my hand

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-01-28 12:51 PM

awww reach out your hand, I'm sure he will take it! I like your rhyming pattern, nice poem

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2002-01-28 12:52 PM

Chrissy,
The suspense of not knowing...is not fun. Hopefully it will be worth the wait. Good luck. Nice write.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2002-01-28 01:28 AM

Not everyone is capable of making their feelings known, or perhaps they are afraid to verbalize them. Then again there are those people who like to keep you guessing
All we can do is say what we mean and mean what we say....

Life is a mixed bag of peanut shells!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2002-01-28 01:42 AM

Chrissy,
Sometimes the waiting is the hardest. Good writing.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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