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Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind


0 posted 01-26-2002 11:24 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes

Whisper to me your poetry

Laced in soulful books

Reveal to me thy words,

In play, to be scripture for the world,

I lay within my darkest hour

Breathing you in

Enter twined with passion,

Desire of longing

A trace of mist softly,

Upon my

poetic lips


I feel you sleep

Among my heart

While the innocent fall

Touch me in the breeze

Of flowers

Lilies and orchids

Gentle flesh giving

Be silent

I close my eyes

Touch me again with

Trembling hands,

Tears of rain,

Beauty is with you

Sleeping upon the earth

*****



Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart



[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-26-2002 11:29 AM).]

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Startime
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1 posted 01-26-2002 11:27 AM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

*sigh* *sigh* now you have created a meadow filled with deep love and passion...this is absolutely beautiful....I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!!**big hugs** Passions flows from your pen. It is magnificent to see and feel in your words.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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Very passionate!Enjoyed it!
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3 posted 01-26-2002 11:59 AM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words are a garden filled with blossoms of true love and passion! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, your words are always a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-26-2002 12:00 PM).]

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Greeneyes, this is a most lovely poem, very passionate, love it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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Your magical whispers flow so gently in this one, Lauren. It's as if a soft tender mist covered these blue pages.
Janet Marie
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6 posted 01-26-2002 08:31 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Whisper to me your poetry

Laced in soulful books

Reveal to me thy words,

In play, to be scripture for the world,

I lay within my darkest hour

Breathing you in

Enter twined with passion,

Desire of longing

A trace of mist softly,

Upon my

poetic lips
========================================

and Im giving thanks for those poetic lips and this gift from your pen....
Lauren this is just swept with all the things that make your poetry so beautiful and so uniquely you.
Exceptional poem dear Poetess

I'm like a broken record that you can play ...
Repeating (as if it matters) ... everything I say.

Gin Blossoms

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7 posted 01-26-2002 08:34 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Lauren...THIS is simply PERFECT....wow!!

You have wrapped up desire, passion, yearning
and so much more into this beautiful poem..
Great Job..
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8 posted 01-26-2002 08:35 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Lauren, this reads like a beautiful whisper..
Simply exquisite....with such passion.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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Very beautifully written, Lauren...it has a wispy, magical feel to it!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

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Wonderfully written! Beautiful! Thanks!
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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11 posted 01-27-2002 12:27 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Absolutely beautiful!!
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beautiful indeed...

well penned...

Regards,
sudhir
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Lauren,

"Touch me again with

Trembling hands"

The tenderness of you...revealed once again! Great write. Thanks.
Greeneyes
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14 posted 01-28-2002 11:14 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Thank you all....from the bottom of my heart....I appreciate each of you much...


Lauren~  


Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart


[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-28-2002 11:15 AM).]

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Lauren,I have to agree with everyone else this was beautiful!




Juanita

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16 posted 01-28-2002 01:16 PM       View Profile for Auguste   Email Auguste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Auguste's Home Page   View IP for Auguste

A beautiful read from a beautiful heart.  Lovely, my friend. *hugs*

Michael

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There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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Dittos on the accolades.  Very soft and gentle poem with beautiful mood and pictures.

never try to teach a pig to sing
it wastes your time AND annoys the pig

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very romantic!
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