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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-01-26 11:24 AM

Whisper to me your poetry

Laced in soulful books

Reveal to me thy words,

In play, to be scripture for the world,

I lay within my darkest hour

Breathing you in

Enter twined with passion,

Desire of longing

A trace of mist softly,

Upon my

poetic lips

I feel you sleep

Among my heart

While the innocent fall

Touch me in the breeze

Of flowers

Lilies and orchids

Gentle flesh giving

Be silent

I close my eyes

Touch me again with

Trembling hands,

Tears of rain,

Beauty is with you

Sleeping upon the earth

*****

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-26-2002 11:29 AM).]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2002-01-26 11:27 AM

*sigh* *sigh* now you have created a meadow filled with deep love and passion...this is absolutely beautiful....I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!!**big hugs** Passions flows from your pen. It is magnificent to see and feel in your words.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

2 posted 2002-01-26 11:40 AM

Very passionate!Enjoyed it!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-26 11:59 AM

(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words are a garden filled with blossoms of true love and passion! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, your words are always a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-26-2002 12:00 PM).]

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-01-26 12:27 PM

Greeneyes, this is a most lovely poem, very passionate, love it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-01-26 02:01 PM

Your magical whispers flow so gently in this one, Lauren. It's as if a soft tender mist covered these blue pages.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2002-01-26 08:31 PM

Whisper to me your poetry

Laced in soulful books

Reveal to me thy words,

In play, to be scripture for the world,

I lay within my darkest hour

Breathing you in

Enter twined with passion,

Desire of longing

A trace of mist softly,

Upon my

poetic lips
========================================

and Im giving thanks for those poetic lips and this gift from your pen....
Lauren this is just swept with all the things that make your poetry so beautiful and so uniquely you.
Exceptional poem dear Poetess

I'm like a broken record that you can play ...
Repeating (as if it matters) ... everything I say.

Gin Blossoms

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-01-26 08:34 PM

Lauren...THIS is simply PERFECT....wow!!

You have wrapped up desire, passion, yearning
and so much more into this beautiful poem..
Great Job..

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-01-26 08:35 PM

Lauren, this reads like a beautiful whisper..
Simply exquisite....with such passion.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

9 posted 2002-01-26 08:41 PM

Very beautifully written, Lauren...it has a wispy, magical feel to it!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

10 posted 2002-01-26 08:45 PM

Wonderfully written! Beautiful! Thanks!
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

11 posted 2002-01-27 12:27 PM

Absolutely beautiful!!

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

12 posted 2002-01-28 04:39 AM

beautiful indeed...

well penned...

Regards,
sudhir

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

13 posted 2002-01-28 09:51 AM

Lauren,

"Touch me again with

Trembling hands"

The tenderness of you...revealed once again! Great write. Thanks.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

14 posted 2002-01-28 11:14 AM

Thank you all....from the bottom of my heart....I appreciate each of you much...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-28-2002 11:15 AM).]

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

15 posted 2002-01-28 12:52 PM

Lauren,I have to agree with everyone else this was beautiful!

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

16 posted 2002-01-28 01:16 PM

A beautiful read from a beautiful heart. Lovely, my friend. *hugs*

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Canuckster
Member

since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

17 posted 2002-01-28 01:50 PM

Dittos on the accolades. Very soft and gentle poem with beautiful mood and pictures.

never try to teach a pig to sing
it wastes your time AND annoys the pig

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

18 posted 2002-07-13 08:48 AM

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

19 posted 2003-01-22 03:17 AM

very romantic!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

20 posted 2004-10-09 10:56 AM

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