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dgvarner
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0 posted 2002-01-26 10:51 AM



you heard my heart
before i spoke
and you answered it
instantaneously

all your reservations
about loving
          me
have melted away...

i dont want to risk
losing your adoration
by asking too many questions
     but i have them--
          and i know
          you have also...
  
you told me
i shouldnt fall in love with
          you
though never faulted me
when i did anyway...

and now you ignore your advise
loving recklessly
     and who can stop us
          from loving...

will reality grant us
a gentle release
or will we beg
          for mercy...

-dgvarner
1-25-02


~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and i'd give up forever to touch you..cause i know you can feel me somehow..." -googoo dolls

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (01-27-2002 09:56 AM).]

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Zinsser
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1 posted 2002-01-26 12:10 PM


beautiful.......
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-01-26 12:11 PM




(sigh) Such powerful questions fill your words, sweet friend, love will always find a way and may your loving heart be embraced by true happiness to answer all these questions and fill your heart with a smile forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Parker
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3 posted 2002-01-26 12:33 PM


OH mercy .... OH mercy..
omg.... oh mercy baby...

ok... i'm bad.

Parker

Rodney Belcher
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4 posted 2002-01-26 12:35 PM


Love that perseveres even when tried to be held down...that develops when you arent looking...THAT is special!...Rod

Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod

sodpossom
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5 posted 2002-01-26 02:03 PM


Very sweet and beautiful!
Tracey
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6 posted 2002-01-26 07:52 PM


Are we living in a parallel universe or what? You have no idea just how much this piece speaks to me...okay, maybe you do. Such depth of feeling in this one, great writing dg

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Enchantress
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7 posted 2002-01-26 08:31 PM


LOL@Parker's response!!
Love this...I sure do!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

dgvarner
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8 posted 2002-01-26 10:04 PM


ZINSSER..thanks!  
NOAH..thank you!
PARKER..ooh yeah...!...LOL @ you!!  yes...youre bad...
RODNEY..'life is what happens when youre making other plans..'     thanks for reading!
SOD..thank you!
TRACEY..i can read your mind girlfriend...lol duncan got a hold on you eh?     glad youre reading!
NANCY..silly boy isnt he...lol  glad you liked this one..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and i'd give up forever to touch you..cause i know you can feel me somehow..." -googoo dolls

EagleOne
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9 posted 2002-01-26 11:28 PM


Is there any other way to love?
Honeybee
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10 posted 2002-01-26 11:31 PM



I agree that there's no other way to love - this is very well expressed, I really like your style and creative phrasing

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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11 posted 2002-01-26 11:35 PM


begging is ok...it's my main form of foreplay!

I like your style, lady!

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2002-01-27 12:22 PM


Enjoyed...James
Magnus
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13 posted 2002-01-27 12:30 PM


Now...I must say that it has been a few
years since I experienced this love...

But you have brought back many memories..

And such were the days...of loving
recklessly...

dgvarner
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14 posted 2002-01-27 05:41 PM


EDDIE..there is...but its not near as fun...
MELISSA..thanks a bunch!
'DEER..'OH baby baby PLEASE!!'..lol  thanks 'DEER!
JAMESMICHAEL..glad you enjoyed!
MAGNUS..glad i could bring back some memories for you!     

thanks for reading...!!  

hugs, g

Sudhir Iyer
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15 posted 2002-01-28 04:41 AM


enjoyed this one... muchly

Regards,
sudhir

dgvarner
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16 posted 2002-01-28 01:32 PM


thank you SUDHIR

hugs, g

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