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kimie
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since 2002-01-23
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0 posted 2002-01-26 10:51 AM



No kiss ever brought on
a bliss like our first kiss
exploring passion
searching for love
teasing ecstasy
tasting desire
loving love
deliciously sweet
made us want more

© Copyright 2002 kimie - All Rights Reserved
Zinsser
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1 posted 2002-01-26 12:07 PM


Sounds wonderfull.....   : )
Rodney Belcher
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Taylor, Michigan
2 posted 2002-01-26 12:13 PM


ahhh...new love, nothing like it...Rod

Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod

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3 posted 2002-01-26 12:15 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, there's no feeling more happier than loves first kiss! (kiss on cheek) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may your loving heart forever sing with the beauty of new true love! We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kimie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

sodpossom
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since 2001-06-15
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N.C
4 posted 2002-01-26 02:07 PM


You described my first kiss perfectly!Very nice!
Kethry
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Victoria Australia
5 posted 2002-01-26 02:17 PM


kimie,
very descriptive piece and very sweet.
Write on
Kethry.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



strbbux
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Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-01-26 03:23 PM


Very visual Kimie, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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