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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2002-01-26 03:21 AM

Take Me To Mars

I yearn to reach out and touch you
For I am sure that you are real.
All the thoughts you are sending me
Layer me with Love’s warmest feel.

Whisper into my awaiting ear,
Wonders of the universe you hear.
Make my days be as my darkest nights,
Surrounded by celestial delights.

The moon and stars and sunshine bend
Within love messages you send.
Each one touches the heart of me,
The dreams you send, electronically.

Passionate pleadings, a nightly read,
Please take me to Mars and back, I plead.
Polar Lander, with gentler touchdown,
Soft as a moonbeam’s gossamer gown.

Your messages are getting through,
Mine are being received by you.
Two seekers being sought and found,
Entwined in cosmic symphony sound.

Please come with me on a deep space cruise,
I’ll read to you the Ethereal News.
Cluster me a bouquet of starlight,
I’ll spiral you in cosmic green light.

On stellar winds where past souls flew,
O’er seas of deepest space blue hue,
And fields of astro turf that’s real,
Souldance of Love performed by two.

Touch me, feel me, listen to my heart
Kiss me, love me, say we’ll never part.
Hold me closely and trace my face,
So I may know I’m not lost in space.

With fingertips and heart of dove,
To me, you are the sum of Love.
The finest heart of the human race,
Sweetest essence of heavenly grace.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-01-26 03:32 AM

This is like going to heaven and finding out you're still alive.
You've painted the sky so pretty tonight.

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (01-26-2002 12:52 PM).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-01-26 07:14 AM

Whisper into my awaiting ear,
Wonders of the universe you hear.
Make my days be as my darkest nights,
Surrounded by celestial delights.

The moon and stars and sunshine bend
Within love messages you send.
Each one touches the heart of me,
The dreams you send, electronically.

Passionate pleadings, a nightly read,
Please take me to Mars and back, I plead.
Polar Lander, with gentler touchdown,
Soft as a moonbeam’s gossamer gown.
====================================

Kacy this is wonderful ... a lovely poetic melding of cyber space and heaven's space.
Your imagery and vocab carry out your theme
perfectly. Creative writing wrapped in rhyme divine. And the romantic sincerety of it makes it a delight. Love among the stars.
well done Poetess

I'm like a broken record that you can play ...
Repeating (as if it matters) ... everything I say.

Gin Blossoms

brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

3 posted 2002-01-26 07:42 AM

I love your use of space and it's beauty to pen this piece....romancing the stars so to speak....you have penned the mysteries of our universe into a beautiful love song!!!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2002-01-26 07:48 AM

Wow, space invaders never had it so good. Great poem
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2002-01-26 09:27 AM

Kacy~

You have one of the most creative minds on this board....this is magic....and the image is beautiful....

Lauren~

Thoughts slide out
of hiding and cling
to anything I put
in front of them.
Words bead up
like dew and in
a moment,
will be accessible.

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-26-2002 02:09 PM).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2002-01-26 01:43 PM

Blues, what a sweet, interesting reply.

JM, I'm always happy to have you read. You hold up a mirror for me, and let me see (and understand) what it was I wrote.

Brian, what a nice comment. Thank you for traveling with me for a moment.

Kethry, LOL, space invaders...hmm.
Thanks.

Lauren,

You are too generous, but I thank you so much for your reply. In childhood, my creativity sometimes got me into trouble.

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

7 posted 2002-01-26 01:57 PM

A very beautiful and peaceful picture painted here.Nice job!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-01-26 02:02 PM

(smiles) Oooohhhhhhhh...I love this, this is sooooooo gorgeous and creative! (kiss on cheek) May he always be your Mars and may you always be his Venus among eternal loves horizons! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2002-01-26 02:17 PM

sodpossum, thanks! And did I ever tell you how much I like that pen name?

Noah, thank you. Venus and Mars, among passionate blue page stars. How could Love miss in this ethereal setting?

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

10 posted 2002-01-26 02:53 PM

Midnite, what a beautiful vision you have created. just wonderful. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2002-01-26 05:09 PM

Floria, so glad you enjoyed the Love trip through space.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

12 posted 2002-01-26 07:08 PM

Midnitesun,
Allright! Who are you really? And what did you do with Kacy? Are you sure there wasn't a camel in this trip? 'Cause if not...this was really good.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2002-01-26 07:30 PM

Kacy?! Is that you in there? Ha! Sounds as though you have been bitten by the cyber love bug

....and what a beautiful creative write you came up with here!
YES!! I love it!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

14 posted 2002-01-27 01:51 AM

Larry and Enchantress, LOL at both your replies! Yes, 'tis me surfing the stellar winds and 'tripping the lights fantastic.' I forgot who said that first or I'd give due credit. (Kesey or Leary?) This kind of writing comes from listening to 'space' music, specifically, Tangerine Dream's album from 1999, "Mars Polaris"......that and a inspirational soulmate.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

15 posted 2002-01-27 10:46 PM

Well your inspirational soulmate leads you well, this was "glowing" and absolutely delightful Kacy.

<font face="monotype corsiva">~* Carpe' Diem *~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

16 posted 2002-01-28 03:12 AM

Ah, my other a-musing friend, Mysteria. Smiling at your reply.

The stars are aligning themselves as we speak.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

17 posted 2002-01-30 09:49 PM

I LOVE this write...... : )
Beautiful

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

18 posted 2002-01-30 09:52 PM

Zinsser, thank you! I love this one myself.

It was inspired by my special starlight, and music from Tangerine Dream's 1999 CD Mars Polaris.

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