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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-01-26 02:04 AM


Friday's Lovers

This lonely world had kept
them apart for way too long
til they met one evening and found
gravity pulling them together.

Until finally they no longer felt
all alone in this great big world.
Time seemed to stand still as they
captured some romantic moments and
enjoyed the pleasure of each other.

Memories were made and passion uncovered
as two loving hearts shared
in the magical embrace
of friday's lovers.

JamesLee
January26
2002


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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2002-01-26 02:17 AM


That is what Fridays are for.
Or another day for that matter,
when love plays a part in our memories
and memories play a part in our love.
  

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2002-01-26 03:09 AM


Only on Fridays, what a disappointment, that sort of love should last all week.
Good Write
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



sodpossom
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since 2001-06-15
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3 posted 2002-01-26 02:57 PM


I agree with Kethry on this one.Nice write!
strbbux
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4 posted 2002-01-26 02:59 PM


OOOOH James, this touched me so.. Lovely write, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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5 posted 2002-01-26 03:18 PM




(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, it is so amazing what a Friday night can bring like any other night! (big hugggssssss) May the beauty of true love forever fill your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
6 posted 2002-01-26 03:23 PM


*sigh* Friday night was the beginning of discovery for these two lovers and you have said it perfectly...I think this poem is a gentle but passionate masterpiece. I love it...More, James...I do hope this happened to you. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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