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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

0 posted 2002-01-26 01:46 AM

Please click on the link below, then minimize it if you wish to hear a beautiful song to accompany the poem.
play Remember Song

~*Our Unfinished Symphony *~
© Mysteria January 2001

My heart remembers
his concerto.
It made me dance
and my spirit sang.
The lyrics of our souls
never parted lips,
yet passed eye to eye,
cheek to cheek,
and spirit to spirit.
His high-pitched whispers
permeated every crevasse
of my being,
quivering my flesh.
I held him
close to my neck,
nuzzling him to my chin
like a well strung violin,
while he played for me,
like a virtuoso
accompanying my lyrics
in a rhythm of love.
And in that split second,
our crescendo made
two half notes whole.
Why did the music end?
I now wear a shroud of sadness,
As I grieve our
unfinished symphony.
~*~

Music: Bruce deBoeur ~ Remember http://www.geocities.com/Vienna/7189/page1.html

Art: Jean-Paul Avisse ~ Unfinished Symphony http://www.lightworks.com/gallery/avisse.html

~* Carpe' Diem DIEM *~

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (01-26-2002 07:40 AM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-01-26 03:06 AM

Mysteria, how beautiful and yet so sad! Isn't an unfinished symphony is better than no symphony? My symphony is just beginning.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-01-26 07:06 AM

The lyrics of our souls
never parted lips,
yet passed eye to eye,
cheek to cheek,
and spirit to spirit.
His high-pitched whispers
permeated every crevasse
Of my being,
quivering my flesh.
I held him
close to my neck,
nuzzling him to my chin
like a well strung violin,
while he played for me,
like a virtuoso
=============================

Yowzwers...I love the sultry sensual current of this...and that picture is gorgeous...you always find such beautiful photos and are so well inspired by them...love the theme and metaphor of music in this Sharon...you carried it out to poetic perfection.
Good to see you posting again

jm

I'm like a broken record that you can play ...
Repeating (as if it matters) ... everything I say.

Gin Blossoms

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2002-01-26 07:13 AM

mysteria
You outdid yourself on this one
Simply beautiful
You have a wonderful style of writing
enhanced with music and graphics
And of course, you
Liz

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2002-01-26 08:03 AM

Mysteria,
you turned beautiful poetry into a symphony of the senses.
Well done
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-01-26 08:17 AM

Both the picture and the music with the read of the words are truly wonderful. Especially if it is read with the slow tune...very romantic.

You wrote this a year ago? Where HAVE you been hiding this little treasure!?

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-26-2002 08:18 AM).]

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2002-01-26 09:32 AM

The lyrics of our souls
never parted lips,
yet passed eye to eye,
cheek to cheek,
and spirit to spirit""

This poem was like watching an opera unfold,
So soft, and gentle with longing passion…..

Lauren~

Thoughts slide out
of hiding and cling
to anything I put
in front of them.
Words bead up
like dew and in
a moment,
will be accessible.

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-26-2002 09:33 AM).]

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2002-01-26 10:28 AM

Midnitesun ~ Yes, your symphony is beginning, and its music is so beautiful, thanks Kacy!

Janet Marie ~ This time the picture was first LOL, thanks.

Elizabeth ~ Hugs for that!

Lauren ~ Your comment was a lovely poem in itself, thank you so very much.
Kethrey ~ and you know all about symphonies too right? Thank you.

Sunshine ~ Thank you - at another site I used to post at, forgot I did it until I found it in my books. LOL, and found way more too!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-01-26 01:00 PM

(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sad but yet sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I hope now your heart has embraced true love once more and your symphony of eternity has been playing on ever since! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, ooohhhhh...I'm so happy you posted this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

9 posted 2002-01-26 01:55 PM

Beautiful mixed in with a little sadness.Very nicely done!

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

10 posted 2002-01-26 02:03 PM

Very lovely, Sharon. Much enjoyed the poem, the picture and accompanying music.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

11 posted 2002-01-26 03:12 PM

Hello Sharon

Such a sad yet beautiful song you have given us - beautifully written and expertly played.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

12 posted 2002-01-26 03:26 PM

*sigh* your words always sing so beautifully...I am not sure how you do it but I am sure glad you do. I love this..I love the way it felt...like there is much yet to be sung...BRAVO!!!**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

13 posted 2002-01-26 04:24 PM

Noah ~ How sweet - but afraid it was just a poem I wrote on a piece of art I found, my heart is in tact! Thank you.

Sodpossom ~ Thank you and nice to meet you, will check out your poetry as well.

Michael ~ Thank you so much for such a lovely comment, I appreciate it.

Sue ~ Thank you sweet friend, yanno that old art speaks to me sometimes

Startime ~ Thank you so much and I am WAY behind in my reading will catch up with you tonight!

~* CARPE' DIEM *~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

14 posted 2002-01-26 04:43 PM

The lyrics of our souls
never parted lips,
yet passed eye to eye,
cheek to cheek,
and spirit to spirit.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sharon...you have outdone yourself with this treasure! There is nothing quite as hauntingly beautiful as an unfinished symphony...you always wonder how it may have turned out. This piece along with the music and picture is superb!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

15 posted 2002-01-26 05:19 PM

I agree with Nancy on this one…there is nothing as hauntingly beautiful as an unfinished symphony. But, I might add, there is also nothing as hauntingly painful too. And yes, we’re left wondering why the music ever had to end. Nice to see you here again Sharon.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

16 posted 2002-01-26 10:58 PM

Nancy thank you for taking the time to write such a lovely comment.

Tracey - been busy and it ended because he was a real jerk

LOL, thanks for the warm welcome back.

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