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Rodney Belcher
Member

since 2000-06-06

Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan

0 posted 2002-01-25 11:31 PM

The love that exists within my heart
Could be spread evenly
Across the midnight sky
Never leaving a star untouched
Each star could count another way
I feel my love for you
The chill that comes from an arctic wind
Cannot touch me when caressed
By the warmth of your love
The ocean tide crashing in
Could say your name with each wave
But still not outlast my thoughts of you
A lone eagle, flying high above
Soaring so high that he is but a speck
In the azure tapestry
Still does not top the heights of emotion
From a touch of your sweet body to mine
You never give yourself credit
For what you inspire in me
You don’t realize your own worth
To keep my world alive
I dread the morning sun
When you aren’t in my arms
I wish the dark would never lift
Until the brightness that is you
Enters and chases it away
And saves me from drowning
In my lonely tears

Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-25 11:42 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Sooooooo sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I hope now you wake up to the morning light with love in your arms close to your heart and now you cry with tears of joy! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rodney, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

2 posted 2002-01-26 12:37 PM

This is so beautifully written, Rodney and so very romantic...almost magical!
I loved it a lot!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

3 posted 2002-01-26 03:06 PM

Beautiful imagery and write!Very nice!

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2002-01-26 03:31 PM

*sigh* this is so heartfelt and so beautifully said...*sigh* I love the way it flows with all the love your heart feels for her. Lucky lady she is to have one love her like this. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2002-01-26 03:47 PM

Rodney,
it must be coming up to Valentine's Day there are so many romantic poems here.

I love the softness and yearning in this one.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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