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Larry C
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0 posted 2002-01-25 08:17 PM


Buns*
By Larry Chadwick

There is little more fun,
Then that of using a pun.
As when saying what you mean,
But things aren’t as they seem

It happens often by chance,
When with words we dance.
Creating such delight,
As we laugh so bright.

Freud claimed he knew the facts,
About our small tongues lapse.
He couldn’t accept reality,
It was just a little banality.

So don’t worry about what you say,
Or that we might take it another way.
We’re just laughing at your expense,
Your words are our pretense.

January 23, 2002


*Of course it’s an intentional typo!


© Copyright 2002 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-25 08:20 PM


HAHAH there you go again Larry, giving me a big smile, heres one back. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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Suetang
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2 posted 2002-01-25 08:25 PM


Hello Larry

And I thought you meant hot cross buns, didn't you Larry?? It is getting close to Easter after all!  I loved this, very witty!

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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3 posted 2002-01-25 08:28 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh Larry, this is sooooooo hilarious, yes, we must be careful how we use puns for our words can sometimes be thought of another way!!! (smiles) Sooooooo clever, sweet friend, your delightful words always bring a smile to my face! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-01-25 09:39 PM


oooohhhh! aha!!! i get it now... you're following me up and down the stairs again, right?   ...well, come on and  see if  i care!!! i hope you don't freudian slip!
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5 posted 2002-01-25 09:46 PM


This is very cute!  I enjoyed reading it!   .  Nice work!

Noelle

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6 posted 2002-01-25 09:56 PM


Larry darling boy if anyone knows Freudian slips it has to be me. The number of times I simply slip up……….. Whoops there I very nearly did.

Wonderful writing darling boy utterly utterly wonderful. And as usual your writing is perfect, not a beat out of place.

Yes I love it love it love it, very cute darling boy just like you


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

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7 posted 2002-01-25 10:30 PM


Thanks, Larry. I needed that!
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8 posted 2002-01-25 10:37 PM


*giggling* oh yes, well done. Now it is time for me to laugh...I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Larry C
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9 posted 2002-01-25 11:26 PM


floria,
Liked the smile. Thanks!  

Sue,
Okay...count me in! LOL Thanks.  

Noah,
Thanks a bunch!  

dor,
By the way, I'll take my chances on the stairs anyday.  Cool...more, more!

dawn to dusk,
Welcome to Passions. Hope you like it here as much as me! And thanks.  

[This message has been edited by Larry C (01-25-2002 11:31 PM).]

Larry C
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10 posted 2002-01-25 11:30 PM


Mushy,
Hey...tweety pie, thanks tons!

Silver Streak,
My pleasure and thank you!

Karen,
Oh good, I hoped you'd like it! Thanks.

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11 posted 2002-01-26 04:34 PM


Larry~

What kinda buns are we talking about here?? LOL  


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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12 posted 2002-01-26 04:46 PM


I have to love that title,
kind of a squeeze play there~
and such a great message Larry!

*Absolutely Delightful*


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13 posted 2002-01-26 04:47 PM


LOL....was going to say something....nope....not here, not now, no way!
Good write Larry...thanks for the smiles!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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14 posted 2002-01-26 04:51 PM


loved the levels Larry...you are an elevated man. (Let that give rise to Freudian Slips)
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Larry C
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15 posted 2002-01-27 12:09 PM


Lauren,
Now that you brought it up...LOL.

BluesSerenade,
Loved your massage...I mean message! LOL Thanks.

Nancy Lee,
Such restraint! LOL

Keth,
I see several puns here! LOL Thanks.

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