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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-01-25 10:44 AM



Guiding Light

You've placed an angel in my life,
each time I've tried to guide on own.
Daily tasks can overwhelm
but words from you, can weave, on loan,
the tapestry, the golden threads,
silver riches of banded light.
Just being there, the magic touch
an Angel taps to hug me tight,
to save me from the bruising fall.
The sun, the moon, the stars that shine
all gather now to myst my dreams
and lay before me days of mine
that strengthen, pick me up, console
until that final day shall be.
Encircled, sheathed by image pure,
an angel rests, her wings on me.

M
* again you have inspired and I thank you


"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-25-2002 10:45 AM).]

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sodpossom
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since 2001-06-15
Posts 723
N.C
1 posted 2002-01-25 10:47 AM


I think you have inspired me now.Very nice!
strbbux
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since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-01-25 12:40 PM


Wow, nakd, and it just keeps on going, for you have now inspired me...nice to have good friends. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2002-01-25 03:30 PM


If I have inspired you, then that pleases me...thank you both *s

Maureen

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
4 posted 2002-01-26 12:09 PM


I hate to be a copycat, Maureen...but I guess I have to be, because you have also inspired me with your beautiful poetry.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2002-01-26 10:18 AM


Lyra, Thank you very much *s
Maureen

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