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Melancholy Sigh
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Melancholy Sigh |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Ill remember like the lantern of dawn a deer prancing with her brown-nose fawn awakening spirits of a sleepy morn still kindling sweet embers in my heart A vermilion sunset kisses softly the sea imitating you making love to me above misty mountains of majesty ill remember you through infinity I think of you with a melancholy sigh your image portrays a teardrop in my eye dancing upon wondrous wicks of night ill remember with bittersweet delight still a wildflower in meadows of my mind a murmur of a breeze from another time You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. -Ziggy [This message has been edited by Victoria (01-27-2002 09:23 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sad sigh) Soooooooo sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and pray that this wildflower of true love will again blossom in your heart and the image that you cherish dearly will come to forever offer you eternal love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Sounds like you have got some very fond memories.Very nice job! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~I think of you with a melancholy sigh your image portrays a teardrop in my eye dancing upon wondrous wicks of night ill remember with bittersweet delight still a wildflower in meadows of my mind a murmur of a breeze from another time~ truly a melancholy sigh, bittersweet but beautiful penned. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
the bittersweet, how sad yet lovely~! you have such a way of capturing the emotions~! *S* Z |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
hmm ms V, lovely memories made replayed |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Victoria, this is so lovely and poignant. Every line is beautiful but the entire second stanza is my favorite. Cheryl |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~V~ very beautiful....remembering love.... Lauren~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-25-2002 11:48 AM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Noah dear..just a melancholy poem  hugssthank you sodpossom for peeking in today.. charisma..thank you sweet one hugss ATOV..thank you so much..glad you enjoyed my friend hugs DS..thank you kind sir hugs Cheryl..thank you so much..glad you enjoyed hugs Lauren..thank you very much Lauren.nice to hear from you hugss |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
so so lovely Victoria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you annie..hugss..nice to hear from you hon You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, I know this sigh, it hovers around my heart daily. I can't decide if the memories make life better, or if I would rather have amnesia! Sandra |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Victoria Dear. I just love this verse so much. "A vermilion sunset kisses softly the sea imitating you making love to me above misty mountains of majesty ill remember you through infinity" Lovely, floria Floria |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
yours are words that should preciously be held so behold! all who read them will cradle them dear. This is my last post here, Victoria. This reply, and one parting poem: A Melancholy Plea Hold not a melancholy plea Whose coils constrict a heavy heart. Release of your gifts of promise will cease the bleat of sorrow. Benevolent familial largess bestows a fervent assistance; a beacon to guide safely ashore; astray & chaotic mournings checked. Take not a long drink from dry wells- the retrieval of liquid hope lies stagnant; sate the thirst augmented by stranger's kindness. Back away from the unforgiving precipice - Ignore the urgent welcomes of Sirens. You are not yet meant to hear those incessant passing bells. Embrace your brother; breath his calm Expel the battle within your self. Soar with the peace of doves; there are good blessings yet to receive. (c) 2001 Picasso Lyrics/aka ShadowRider |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you sandra..yes strange isnt it the way it hovers ..hugs thank you floria..nice to hear from you |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you very much dear SR.. and for that lovely poem i hope you return again i did save your sleepy eyes poem in my library..my favorite.. be happy...hugss ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* a melancholy memory indeed...yet filled with such tendernes..A heartfelt poem that touched me as I read it. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Victoria, what a memory...what a write. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you karen..nice to hear from you thank you kethry...glad you enjoyed.. |
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