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Cabin Fever
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Cabin Fever |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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Train whistle blows long and lonesome between these hills Night glistens in rain tin symphony Log splinters tipped in neon orange Centers sizzle and burst open smiling in ashen phrases of surrender The wind occasionally picks up and breathes round the outside walls lifting and knocking shutters playing the chimes in salida notes With both wings wrapped in dove peace cooing quilted I am upon you into the lamplight of hoot eyes crying to be free just as free as I am with you in the midst of this cabin fever |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
rwood~ This is a fantastic write, with so many images....I enjoyed the passion that quietly lingered between the lines..  Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-25-2002 08:55 AM).] |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Doesn’t sound like what is normally thought of as Cabin Fever, since I don’t think you wanted to get out, but Hot just the same. Bill |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
This is a very mature write. I really appreciate the way you have uniquely combined and blended your words to create pictures and moods. never try to teach a pig to sing |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
the sky is a bowl of nearly eaten ceral a cherrio floats on too much milk hoping to drown but the milk is plastic only her spoon eyes can bring salvation |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Regina, With a fever like that...I'd stay home, willingly!  Fun write. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such gorgeous passion always drips from your quill and creates such gorgeous visions that have me daydreaming! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is such a beautiful poem that had me feel like I was sitting by the fire in the cabin! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-25-2002 10:06 AM).] |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Beautiful images!Well written. |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Excellent, excellent images!!! I reread this several times stopping to enjoy each sight and sound you presented. Thanks for the nice read. Mike |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
fresh, original images, adds to my quiet reading time, please keep writing, I've bookmarked your homepage for inspiration, it is beautiful. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Night glistens in rain tin symphony Log splinters tipped in neon orange Centers sizzle and burst open smiling in ashen phrases of surrender ================================== playing the chimes in salida notes With both wings wrapped in dove peace cooing quilted I am upon you ================================ Cabin Fever??...Im thinking more like "Canned Heat"  Once again your imagery and phrasing are as impressive and fresh... and the subtle sensuality that smoulders between the lines is always done to poetic perfection. more superb poetry from that muse of yours...you know the one...that gives me a bad case of poet envy everytime I read. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Into the lamp light of hoot eyes crying... OH yes....this is a good one Regina... |
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