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Honeybee
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0 posted 2002-01-24 11:07 PM



God Makes Anything Possible
Double Tanka


At the yawn of time
the sun wore a somber robe
until the Lord danced
Luna fell in love with day
and it's blaze became golden
~
In the hush of breeze
you can hear God paint the sun
many shades of smiles
everything is possible
even rainbows can be touched

By Melissa P. Monette


© Copyright 2002 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2002-01-24 11:10 PM


he sure does and I'm living proof!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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2 posted 2002-01-24 11:11 PM


Definitely! God makes everything possible!
This is so true and pretty Melissa


RP

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3 posted 2002-01-24 11:13 PM


*sigh* magnificent...Yes, He, surely does...how stunning His handiwork is. **big hugs** You have said it with a beauty that does justice to the talent He gifted you with.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (01-24-2002 11:14 PM).]

Silver Streak
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4 posted 2002-01-24 11:25 PM


Melissa, God does make everything possible. I am living proof, too. In a bothched open heart surgery thirty one years ago the doctors said to pray that I would die. I didn't! Still here to haunt them. Bypass? It closed up but God grew a collateral artery. Doctors can't do that yet.
-newell  

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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5 posted 2002-01-25 12:46 PM


"you can hear God paint the sun"...how good is THAT???
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6 posted 2002-01-25 02:02 AM


How good was that entire sequence of words!  Melissa that was fantastic, and I saved that one in the Tanka Hall of Fame!   Beautifully done.

~*  CARPE' DIEM  *~

ellie LeJeune
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7 posted 2002-01-25 06:20 AM


How magnificent is our God! You have written these so beautifully, dear Melissa. Hugs Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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8 posted 2002-01-25 09:52 AM




YAY!!! (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet Melissa, He can do anything, and He always creates the most beautiful masterpieces for all to behold and cherish! (kiss on cheek) Your words are always so breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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9 posted 2002-01-25 09:54 AM


So very true!Well done!
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10 posted 2002-01-25 10:00 AM


Beautiful tankas, and it fits the awesome picture very well.

enjoyed it very much

Charisma

Dennis L. White
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11 posted 2002-01-25 11:43 AM


Melissa,

Beautiful contemplation of the awesomeness and beauty of the creation of our GOD.
Well Done!

Dennis :^)

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12 posted 2002-01-25 12:17 PM


Lovely tankas indeed melissa ..hugs..nicely done

          ~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

Janet Marie
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13 posted 2002-01-25 11:44 PM


Luna fell in love with day
and it's blaze became golden
~
In the hush of breeze
you can hear God paint the sun
many shades of smiles
======================================

Your imagery is divine Melis...you can keep your monopoly money LOL...
cuz I do love this
beautiful Queen of Tanka

I'm like a broken record that you can play ...
Repeating (as if it matters) ... everything I say.

Gin Blossoms

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