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Ladyhawke
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0 posted 2002-01-24 09:36 PM


An image outside
The window beckons
From uninhabited
Lands, fresh and newly
Born (untouched by the
Race of man).

"Come," says he, "There
Are no others, I am lone.
I came across, now you
Are here. Come into my
Country home."

I stand inside
And watch the trees
Bend slightly in the
Steady breeze
That brings to mind
The rush of waterfall,
The air, the field,
All is pristine.

The rabbits run
For the warren.
Deer mingle in the pines.
How incredible
To conceive
That this world could
Be yours and mine.

© Copyright 2002 Ladyhawke - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-01-24 09:41 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words are always such a delight to read and take me away to the most beautiful places of freedom and peace! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this had me feeling right at home! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

doreen peri
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2 posted 2002-01-24 11:02 PM


how incredible to conceive it, indeed!!! and it's what we all seek.... a world to share with another....

beautifully stated.....

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3 posted 2002-01-25 12:10 PM


this is wonderful, Ladyhawke

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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4 posted 2002-01-25 03:15 PM


beautiful gem.

Thank you for sharing ladyhawke

((hugs))
Charisma

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