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Ladyhawke
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0 posted 2002-01-24 09:23 PM



By evil Queen Fate cursed,
And her sister, Destiny,
I face a travesty
Of near miss...
For, to hold the kingdom
In our hands, and classic
Love realized,
First must the spell
Be broken
Of the Hawke, she flies
By day,
And he, a Wolf by night.

Talons tethered to his
Arm, forever kept
Close from harm,
And by the moon
They travel until
A warm pillow,
His flank becomes,
And the gray mane.

Until events long
Coming, we wait
At one another's
Side:Until the day
The curse be broken,
A human man
With human bride.

© Copyright 2002 Ladyhawke - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2002-01-24 09:27 PM


*sigh* oh I simply love it...This is pure magic with fantasy at its very best. BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!!**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Rodney Belcher
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2 posted 2002-01-24 09:29 PM


Nice imagery...I was caught up in it...Rod

Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod

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3 posted 2002-01-24 09:29 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...I love it, I love it, this is such a wonderful vision of yourself and the love that shines in your heart, this is beautiful! (kiss on cheek) Your words are always a delight to read, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ladyhawke, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-01-24 09:30 PM


YES!!  Love the fantasy of this piece!
Well done Ladyhawke!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Tracey
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5 posted 2002-01-24 09:42 PM


What an enchanting, magical piece this is.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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6 posted 2002-01-24 10:52 PM


A well written magical tale.
I felt those talons holding tight,
and heard a lonely wolf cry at night.

'Fate' can be cruel.

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