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HEG
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0 posted 2002-01-24 02:16 AM



Run, rabbit, run! Escape
Again and again. Best
Be bashful, burrowing.
Bravery betrays you.
Inside your burrow deep,
This is your best defense.


ASIDE : This is my first attempt at writing an acrostic poem.

© Copyright 2002 HEG - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2002-01-24 08:27 PM


This is very good, HEG! I enjoyed this!
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2 posted 2002-01-24 08:30 PM


aww cute, I like
I've never attempted an acrostic, I should try

Startime
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3 posted 2002-01-24 08:32 PM


Hey you did a great job...you poem even painted a vision....BRAVO!!!**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2002-01-24 08:32 PM


Excellent acrostic!!
Enjoyed this one so much!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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5 posted 2002-01-24 08:34 PM




Ooohhhhhhhh...I love it, I love it, acrostics are so fun and lovely! (big hugggssssss) This is soooooo wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet HEG, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-01-24 08:44 PM


you did good
HEG
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7 posted 2002-01-24 08:55 PM


Dear Denise, RosePetal, Startime, Enchantress, Noah, and wayoutwalt ~~

   Thank you all for your kind remarks about this poem. I do appreciate your taking time to reply!
   My first acrostic poem was fun!!

Cheers!
Harry

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