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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-01-23 09:53 PM

Our Mystical Prom
By: Noah Eaton
1/23/02

Under these white blossoming almond trees
I'll take your hand and dance with you in the fiery butterfly weed
Through the twilight we will softly fiddle
Songbirds in melody, falling in love while we whistle

As the weeping willows lift down their pompadours
We'll kiss sweetly in our romantic folklore
Watching as leaves float into the breeze like butterflies
Encircling us with whispers of loves sheer delight

Cabretta stars glaze your glittery face when you rejoice so proud
You wear the moonlight like a marseille nightgown
Your eyes are lined with mascara of stardust
Lingerie of Venus lights your goddess body in this heavenly dusk

I will be your loving bridegroom, forever and a day
Embracing against the corona of lovers may
Treading happily on our dreams like happy swans
Sharing loves first kiss in Our Mystical Prom...

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-23-2002 10:50 PM).]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2002-01-23 10:10 PM

*sigh* mystically beautiful, Noah...you paint such wonderful visions. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2002-01-23 10:43 PM

i dont know if i can picture you as a bridemaid ha...how about a bridegroom

Enjoyed reading..and hope your prom is mystical as this poem..hugss

~Vic

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-01-23 10:46 PM

You have an unending cache of beautiful words Noah, and this poem,It is wonderful.floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2002-01-23 11:15 PM

Your poetry comes alive through the life you breathe through your words. It's always good to read you Noah!

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

5 posted 2002-01-23 11:25 PM

My goodness, Noah, this is beyond beautiful, My Friend! You always have the most romantic things to say. Great write here!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2002-01-23 11:28 PM

Noah - you write with your style so very well. I hope, no I pray that your sweetheart reads this. How can she resist???

BC

poeticdreamer
Junior Member

since 2002-01-17

Posts 46

7 posted 2002-01-23 11:53 PM

Bravo! Words that caress the minds of all that have had the pleasure to read them! Love, poeticdreamer

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

8 posted 2002-01-24 10:06 PM

awwwwwwwww this is soooo breath taking.
I love all the discriptions you've painted in here! I will always save the last dance for you

oh i love it i love it i love it i love it
ooh sorry im gettin carried away....

love u

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