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Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2002-01-23 09:28 PM

Meet Me In The Meadow

She sent him the singing letter
with notes, of love, so clear
From tears of joy it got wetter,
smudged but she knew he’d hear

A whisper so soft and gentle,
the kiss to make it seal
She’s feeling so sentimental,
from joy she can’t conceal

She knows that his gentle caress
will fill her heart with smiles
Desire not needed to repress
passions sent over miles

Her message is filled with starlight,
no longer in shadow
My love, please come, to me, tonight,
meet me in the meadow

Karen Torbiak 2002©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-01-23 09:32 PM

Oh, Karen, my first poem I ever wrote was about a meadow so of course I jumped on this one

I enjoyed this so much!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

DarkAngelChelle
Member

since 2001-12-06

Posts 87
Kansas

2 posted 2002-01-23 09:36 PM

Ooo, I loved this! It just made me sigh. So sweet and romantic ... I just get this wonderful image of two lovers coming together with a passionate embrace and kiss.

~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

3 posted 2002-01-23 09:38 PM

AWesome write! In my humble opinion, the last line says it all. Very well expressed.

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

4 posted 2002-01-23 09:39 PM

Starlight, this is beautiful! The only thing that I can think of that would nicer than starlight in a meadow, would be to meet someone special, like you, there. Thanks for sharing.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Keith Morgan
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since 2001-10-29

Posts 114
Md

5 posted 2002-01-23 09:40 PM

Very sweet and passionate poem. First smile I have had all day. Thank you for lighting the fire.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2002-01-23 09:40 PM

Hello Karen
You write of romance so eloquently and you always present the most beautiful images through your words. I just loved this!
Take care....Sue

Suetang

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-01-23 09:41 PM

(smiles) Soooooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love meadows, and this is soooooo gorgeous! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may the meadow of your heart bloom with true love and joy! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2002-01-23 09:43 PM

Beautifully done.
To meet in the meadow beneath the moonlight.
Awwwww hmmmmmmm~~~
Your words are so romantic Startime.

brianbeaudry
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since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

9 posted 2002-01-23 09:46 PM

You will remember the first part of this one dear friend;

Written upon the gentlest breeze
Each verse gifts note serene
Drifting beneath the Meadow’s stars
Above soft carpet green

There he awaits his lady fair
Beneath sweet blossom,s veil
Arms opened wide in longing call
Heart praying love's prevail

You know I loved it Karen!!!

Vacuity
Junior Member

since 2002-01-22

Posts 12

10 posted 2002-01-23 09:52 PM

nice write. me likes. (i'm really bad at leaving notes on what i thought...other than that...)

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

11 posted 2002-01-23 09:54 PM

So romantic and beautiful, like only you can write.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

12 posted 2002-01-23 10:14 PM

Karen - what a romantic you are. I love your writings, full of love, full of romance, and very tender...

BC

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2002-01-23 10:18 PM

Few could resist...James

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

14 posted 2002-01-23 10:49 PM

Karen that title just drew me in. and I am so glad I came in, this is simply beautiful. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

15 posted 2002-01-23 10:52 PM

Karen, this poem is a sweet embrace, surrounded by wildflowers.
I loved it!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

16 posted 2002-01-23 10:57 PM

lovely karen dear..a meadow what a lovely place to meet that special someone..as long as there is no poison ivy around ha

hugs

~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

17 posted 2002-01-23 11:28 PM

This is really beautiful! I enjoyed this tremendously!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

poeticdreamer
Junior Member

since 2002-01-17

Posts 46

18 posted 2002-01-23 11:46 PM

A sweet loving message sent with romantic flair within nature's caressing lullaby!
Love, poeticdreamer

Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25

Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable

19 posted 2002-01-24 12:13 PM

Karen! Jaime smiles uncontrolably.
See?
:----------)

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

20 posted 2002-01-24 01:08 AM

Startime...Wonderful moment of the Meadow in startling images and notes of passion. What a gift you possess!!!! **Ivy Rose

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

21 posted 2002-01-24 07:07 AM

How very tender and pretty this is Karen. It left me with visions of the love to come in that meadow.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

22 posted 2002-01-24 07:25 AM

I love the way you rhyme in the most poetically beaming way. You are starshine and your new picture shows that. Big Hugs~

Sincerely,
Regin

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

23 posted 2002-01-24 10:29 AM

Karen~

you embrace love with so much passion....I adore this....a keeper....

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

24 posted 2002-01-24 10:45 AM

You know, I just love to read your poetry. You write such beatiful romance. This is beautiful. I love it.

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

25 posted 2002-01-24 11:44 AM

Karen this was so sweet and lovely.I throughly enjoyed this.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

26 posted 2002-01-24 12:29 PM

Oh Karen! This one has to be my favourite from you! Simply enchanting!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

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