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seraphin
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0 posted 2002-01-23 06:09 PM


Moments spent enfolded with you,
mind and body,
total with you.
Come reigning again over me,
whenever my eyes shut, dark.

'Neath lashes whisper soft on cheek,
images revive,
the tastes of your lips
tasting me
once again does bring me alive.

These images I shall always keep,
dear to my heart,
near to my soul.
Though 'tis not with a memory,
that one may sleep.
Still the memory shall
keep me whole.


© Copyright 2002 Sandra McDonald - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2002-01-23 06:28 PM


Memories are one of the few things in life
that are there for the long haul.

Very nice~

DayDreamer99
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since 2002-01-23
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2 posted 2002-01-23 06:33 PM


memories...one of the greatest things we have been blessed to keep...great poem
Tifferz

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3 posted 2002-01-23 06:48 PM


I have a lot of good memories that i cherish, yet I also have a lot that I'd like to forget.
seraphin
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4 posted 2002-01-23 10:24 PM


You are all correct...and that is what i tried to achieve in this. But...I wanted to bring out the inpossibility of living in a memory.
Again, thank you! ~Sandi

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