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Morcastlin
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0 posted 2002-01-23 05:59 PM


A short monologue. ;o)


Lord William's Plight

Here I stand alone. Oh, what have I done?
Love gave birth to feathered wings and took flight!
Fast and free does she soar my blackened sky.
Away from me! Away from me she flies.
My love, have you know clue of my true heart?
Have I not procured for you all delights?
I cannot reconcile this treachery!
So sweet this pain flows to heart's memory
And so bitter does it fall dead therein.
Here I stand alone. Oh, what have I done?
What have I done to deserve such sorrow?


© Copyright 2002 Bonnie B. Hayes - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-23 06:03 PM


is there a part two?  I want to know what you did
Seriously, I like this, very old world feel.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Morcastlin
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2 posted 2002-01-23 06:05 PM


Thanks, I'm toying with turning this into a play, so there may well be more to come! ;o)

Love, Bonne

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3 posted 2002-01-24 06:01 PM


enjoyed the read!

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4 posted 2002-01-24 06:07 PM




(big huggsssssss) Soooooo sad but beautiful, sweet friend, ooohhhhhhh...I think this would make a marvelous play! (kiss on cheek) I can't wait to read the next parts, sweet friend, this seems so exciting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-01-24 06:07 PM


Nice Morc, I look forward to the second part, floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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