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seraphin
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0 posted 2002-01-23 05:31 PM


FreeFalling,
at a snowflake pace.
Past memories,
of another place,
in time,
when life was a mystery,
when better days,
were yet to be.

FreeFalling,
through love's residue.
The pain still clings,
like morning dew,
to my heart,
and mind.
Still,
bitter I am not.
for I held onto
what was truly mine.

FreeFalling
through an endless sky
of clouds that drift
so slowly by
and teardrops fall
like rain, so soft -
and then as clouds
are borne aloft,
lost in one final
love's good-bye
left floating through
an azure sky.



© Copyright 2002 Sandra McDonald - All Rights Reserved
mauddib
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1 posted 2002-01-23 05:45 PM


so very sad,
I could touch it
in easy reach,
but you know, there is very little difference in falling and flying.
Take care,
God bless.

Magnus
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2 posted 2002-01-23 05:45 PM


This is soft,  yet filled with love...
the past, the memories and the feelings..
Nicely done..

DayDreamer99
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3 posted 2002-01-23 06:31 PM


That was very very good it made me feel exactally what you were talking about
Keep up the god work
Tifferz

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4 posted 2002-01-23 07:20 PM




(sigh) Sooooooo sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and your feelings of lost love, but I know deep down soon you will be embraced by loves sweetness again and will feel happiness and sun-shining days forever! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-23-2002 07:20 PM).]

seraphin
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5 posted 2002-01-23 10:19 PM


My thanks to all for taking the time to stop in. I do appreciate the kind words. ~Sandi
EagleOne
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6 posted 2002-01-24 05:48 AM


A little free falling can be good sometimes, just as long as you don't fall too far, take care!

It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian

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