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nikhilparekh
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since 2002-01-17

Posts 6

0 posted 2002-01-23 01:57 PM

I didn't want the grandiloquent Taj mahal to live in,
A solitary hut with fortified walls would beautifully suffice.

I didn't want to drink chicory mugs of opulent cherry wine
A glass of holistic water was all I needed to quench my thirst.

I didn't want ornate embellishments of cloth to drape my persona,
Jagged rags of jute blended with firmly riveted buttons would work as a wonderful substitute.

I didn't want mesmerizing rhymes sung by the matron in order to sleep,
The monotonous cacophony of vehicular traffic would prove to be an adept tranquilizer.

I didn't want flamboyant cars to traverse the grey carpet of roads,
The non-polluting multiple spiked bicycle would help me maintain my circulation of blood.

I didn't want the silken floss of brush to scrub the armory of my teeth,
Serrated sticks of medicinal neem would render my palette with a ravishing scent all sunlit day.

I didn't want swim in the luxuriously sculptured glistening water pool,
Instead I wanted to feel the exhilaration while trespassing through choppy waves of the saline ocean.

I didn't want to consume pasteurized milk juxtaposed with flavored milk,
Fresh droplets of milk oozing from the teats of mother cow was the one indispensable for my bones.

I didn't want to exorbitantly applauded by scores of innocuous individuals
Benevolent prayers from within deep recesses of their heart would be enough to make me ecstatic.

I didn't want artificial contrivance's to illuminate the atmosphere,
The dazzling light of sun and enchanting beams of moon were fathomless to cherish.

I didn't want appetizing dishes of roasted almonds with a slurry of processed butter,
Bountiful fruits dangling from the tree and a plethora of succulent vegetable leaf would annihilate all indigestion.

I didn't want the luminous dial of imported watch wound tautly against my wrist,
The varied positions of sun god and changing patterns of light would give me an excellent idea of time.

I didn't want battalion of flowers to be laid for my reception,
An ambience bereft dust and debris evacuated of wild thorn would be the enough to express gratitude.

I didn't want fat bundles of currency with you dressed in ostentatious jewelry as my bride,
A rustically polished face with a cluster of inexpensive flower in your hair would pacify my heart,
As I would outrageously cry out in public and say 'I just want your perpetual love'.

(C)COPYRIGHT-2002, BY NIKHIL PAREKH

MY COMPLETE COLLECTION OF POEMS: http://www.Kingfisherbooks.com/Bookshop-1.htm
(IN THE LAP OF MY MOTHER)

MAIL ME AT : coolnick90@yahoo.com

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-01-23 02:05 PM

oh yes! Love is the main course, everything else is just a bonus. Nicely done

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-23 02:08 PM

(smiles) Oooooohhhhhh...your words amaze me, sweet friend, this is just sooooooo beautiful! Love is the greatest beauty in all of life, and all we ever need to feel happiness forever, while everything else is just the sugars and spices that sweeten its essence! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nikhil, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2002-01-23 02:09 PM

I would say you covered it all

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-01-23 02:20 PM

Such a rich selection of lovely words of description...hoping you get it...James

His Poet
Senior Member

since 2001-12-18

Posts 750

5 posted 2002-01-23 02:35 PM

Your poetry is so enjoyable. This is my second one of yours to read and it delights as did the first. Many thanks for sharing. Cheryl

kimie
Junior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 20

6 posted 2002-01-23 04:28 PM

To only want love, that's so romantic.

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