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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 01-23-2002 11:32 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

will you wear the leather
of my wind again
on your charm horizons

and step through my mind
with glass slippers
that sink in my liquid sand

I have known your eyes
you have heard my songs
when we were bibles opened

in dark tunnels
of read only thoughts
with your brail ended fingers

you smiled me with innocent teeth..

ęDark
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1 posted 01-23-2002 11:34 AM       View Profile for Zinsser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zinsser

enjoyed..........
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 01-23-2002 11:37 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

humble thanks
serenity blaze
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3 posted 01-23-2002 11:38 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I have known your eyes
you have heard my songs
when we were bibles opened

in dark tunnels
of read only thoughts
with your brail ended fingers

you smiled me with innocent teeth..

Loved it all, but especially "when we were bibles opened." BEAUTIFUL.
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 01-23-2002 11:40 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

thank you for your serene review
am pleased that you enjoyed
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5 posted 01-23-2002 12:39 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

will you wear the leather
of my wind again
on your charm horizons


love those words..but i have to say no
cause i always have a bad hair day
when im with you

              ~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

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6 posted 01-23-2002 02:10 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

we can mess up your hair
for hours
before
and after

thank you ms V
Martie
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7 posted 01-23-2002 04:14 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

DS...I like your unique way of using words...very alluring feel and a bit of sensual and mystery.
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8 posted 01-23-2002 04:16 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

thank you Martie
it pleases me
that you enjoyed this
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9 posted 01-23-2002 07:19 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Ds, good to see your sensual here.  I have missed your words....

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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10 posted 01-23-2002 07:45 PM       View Profile for seraphin   Email seraphin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for seraphin

Beautifully done. I like the flow. It is definately worth another read...and another.
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11 posted 01-23-2002 07:56 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

will you wear the leather
of my wind again
on your charm horizons....


need anyone say more???


Lauren~
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12 posted 01-23-2002 08:37 PM       View Profile for rwood   Email rwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rwood

~sigh...the scent of leather and reckless abandonment...yes..smiling here.

Sincerely,
Regina
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13 posted 01-24-2002 02:04 AM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

I like that bit about the charm on the horizon,  reminds me of the twilight hour at sunset...It's all so innocent before the darkness falls.  
What I mean is, it's hard to see at night!

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (01-24-2002 02:17 AM).]

Dark Stranger
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14 posted 01-24-2002 05:55 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Gentle Spirit, Thank You sweet lady..

Saraphin, you grace me with your comments, thank you.

Ms Lauren, my humble bow and extended rose with thanks.

Rwood, my leather is at your disposal, please, feel free.


BluesSeranade, a whisper kiss to thy cheek
thank you .

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15 posted 09-06-2004 08:41 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

you smiled me with innocent teeth..

~*~

what a welcome.
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16 posted 09-06-2004 12:58 PM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

*giggle*
ah, had to let you know, this...got me
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