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Mon Cherie
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0 posted 2002-01-23 10:09 AM


Soulmate of mine
So dear to my heart
I have not met you
Yet I know there you are

I will give you my heart
Love you with my all
All I ask is for you
To make yourself known

Come to me this Valentine's
Meet me with a smile
Show me that you love me too
Make me happy

I can wait no longer
To see your beloved face
For I know not who you are
Until we meet some day

Soon.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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1 posted 2002-01-23 10:40 AM




(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may love fill your heart this Valentines Day and may you see his face and find true happiness forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Florence, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Zinsser
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2 posted 2002-01-23 11:36 AM


beautiful.......
Honeybee
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3 posted 2002-01-23 12:10 PM



This is a beautiful, heartfelt prayer to "the one."
And, you know that I love this! ~ I've always believed that everyone has a soulmate

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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4 posted 2002-01-23 02:01 PM


oh I hope he finds you on the day of LOVE
I am always single on valentines day but thats ok. (hugs)

RP

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-01-23 02:17 PM


Yes I noticed that soon...and I hope you have a special Valentines day...James
mauddib
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6 posted 2002-01-23 04:19 PM


Holidays, special days, and birthdays seem to advertise our lonliness in Times Square.
Where every finger of blame seems to be pointing straight at you.
But it really is a state of mind.
Something bought,
Something sold to you,
I would return it and demand your money back!
There is a poem, By TS eliot.  Titled Portrait of a Lady.  You might derive some benefit from it.
take care and God bless

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7 posted 2002-01-23 04:26 PM


simply beautiful!

Charisma

Mon Cherie
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8 posted 2002-01-25 11:26 AM


Thank you, everyone, for dropping by for a read. I haven't been in this forum frequently, coz I'm alwayz in Teens Poetry. But then I still like posting a poem or 2 here!

Yes, this is a heartfelt prayer for "the one" to juz come popping out in front of me (like a pimple... *ewl*). And yes, I hope it is soon... VERY SOON...

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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