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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-01-23 08:05 AM



                                Words Unspoken

you can say
that you love me
forever and a day
but your actions
and the way
you live
your life
speak louder
than anything
that you say


"I have already paid for all my future sins."  Sade...(King of Sorrow)

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-01-23 08:08 AM


this is so true..I love how simply your thoughts are placed.*s

Maureen

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-01-23 08:13 AM


Slick,
Excellent.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-01-23 08:13 AM




(sigh) Sooooooo very well-expressed, sweet friend, and may the love of your life always think and feel for you and bring you true happiness through acceptance and trust of love! (kiss on cheek) Such emotion fills your words, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Zinsser
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Calif.
4 posted 2002-01-23 11:32 AM


simple truth......
strbbux
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5 posted 2002-01-23 12:08 PM


Isn't this the truth slick lady, nice, floria

Floria
"learning, always learning."

Honeybee
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6 posted 2002-01-23 12:11 PM



How true!  Very precise and well said, Helen~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Johnnie
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since 2001-04-08
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Indiana
7 posted 2002-01-25 04:59 PM


Yes, so absolutely true.  There is much wisdom
on these blue pages..


DarkAngelChelle
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since 2001-12-06
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Kansas
8 posted 2002-01-25 05:06 PM


Yes!  Such a well-spoken truth.  Short, precise, and absolutely right.

~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~

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