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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2002-01-23 07:47 AM

Moonlit Promises

My heart contains a moonlit promise,
Warmed by memories of a kiss
Radiating from the heavens
On a moonlit night like this

I remember strolling with you
In the waves on midnight beach
On the fringe of our tomorrows
Moon and dreams within our reach

Illuminating every promise
Lighting words onto the crest
Of rolling waters flowing toward us
Love afloat on oceans breast

Waves were murmuring my feelings
Joining moon and stars above
Resounding every spoken word
That lapped in rhythms of our love

Never had I known a promise
As enchanting as the one
Spoken to a listening moon
And vanishing with dawning sun

Deception shrouds each night, and yet
When moon is sparkling on the sea
On nights like this, the heavens shine
Its diamond promises on me

Elizabeth Santos

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (01-23-2002 07:53 AM).]

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2002-01-23 07:51 AM

"Waves were murmuring my feelings
Joining moon and stars above
Resounding every spoken word
That lapped in rhythms of our love"

Beautiful sentiments and imagery Liz ... a magical flow as always my friend. Much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-23 08:27 AM

"I remember strolling with you
In the waves on midnight beach
On the fringe of our tomorrows
Moon and dreams within our reach"

(smiles) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is such a gorgeous vision of true love and promises bound to come true! (kiss on cheek) You always write soooooo beautifully, sweet friend, may the moonlight forever shine in your heart and in your tears as you rejoice in true love! We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-01-23 09:28 AM

You ARE the diamond in the promise, Elizabeth...

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-01-23 10:03 AM

"Its diamond promises on me" Elizabeth this is simply beautiful.

Floria
"learning, always learning."

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2002-01-28 11:58 PM

OhLizzieLady~
This simply shimmers with beauty~

'Illuminating every promise
Lighting words onto the crest
Of rolling waters flowing toward us
Love afloat on oceans breast

Waves were murmuring my feelings
Joining moon and stars above
Resounding every spoken word
That lapped in rhythms of our love'

I LOVE IT !!!!!
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

6 posted 2002-01-29 12:05 PM

E. Santos, E.xcellent

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2002-01-29 12:08 PM

I adore this, Liz! This is exceptionally beautiful

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2002-01-29 12:25 PM

Deception shrouds each night, and yet
When moon is sparkling on the sea
On nights like this, the heavens shine
Its diamond promises on me

Beautiful flow to this poem Liz, and as I read the last stanza all that could run through my mind was an old saying, "a promise is a promise"

I loved it!

<font face="monotype corsiva">~* Carpe' Diem *~

Johnnie
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since 2001-04-08

Posts 27
Indiana

9 posted 2002-01-29 12:41 PM

this is beautiful, you must have written poetry for a long time, very nice.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2002-01-29 01:04 AM

I like those moonlit walks on midnight beaches...James

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

11 posted 2002-01-29 01:32 AM

very romantic, I enjoyed the walk

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

12 posted 2002-01-29 07:10 AM

Marge, you must have found this way in a backroom somewhere. Thank you all for your very kind comments.
Liz

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