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In The Forest
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In The Forest |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“IN THE FOREST” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I walked in a forest once, surrounded by giant trees… Mighty in their being, knew no boundaries… Serenity I felt inside, peaceful it was then… Felt like I wanted to stay, lay me down in the glen… I waited for you there, many hours did pass… You said you’d come to me, hurry, my heart is of glass… ~~~~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Oh gosh...I saw this vision and felt it too.......In the forest...the mystical forest where fairies make the magic drink of love...*sigh* I am sure she will come to drink from the glass of your love....This is beautiful, Bill. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy I suppose you think that I’m going to praise you to the skies? Hmmm? …….. Well, of course I am, this is utterly utterly wonderful as YOU very well know. How did you do this how many layers of meaning are there? I suspect so many that I could keep revealing more at each new reading. I shall be reading this a lot, into my library with you. This is really fabulous writing sometimes when you don’t expect it you see true beauty this is it. Beauty has a name and it's creater is Bill Absolutely first class writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Marsha said it well, Bill!!! There is a quiet beauty to this poem that insinuates itself inside your heart and leaves you with a wonderful feeling of enchanted anticipation!!! ::sigh:: ::sigh:: ::sigh:: S'wonderful!!!  Hugz, Pepper |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Sometimes...it does matter. I relate too much. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lay me down in the glen..have always wanted to find a place like that..on a mountain top or river valley..spread a blanket and spend time with someone special...some day I will Bill..and you, too will have that peaceful loving moment also. A beautiful poem as always,they touch me. Maureen |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
The voice of song is heard every time thy words are viewed by mine eyes. I left upon these pages, blue a note, my spirit's gift to you... Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Bill, this is soooooooo beautiful, I love it! (smiles) I hope your anticipation became pure rapture and your love came to share that magic moment of serenity with you, it must have been such a beautiful forest to rest in! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, your visions always make me smile, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bill this is a truly beautiful write. Lovely one for me to read first thing this morning....enjoyed so much! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Stay there Bill, I sure she'll be along soon. Enjoyed. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Bill this beautiful. I will have to post my poem"heart of glass" sometime. Nice thoughts here, Floria |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
enjoyed... very much |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wonderfully penned, Bill, this is a delicate call to her...and I love the last stanza! This is softly powerful Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I told you to follow the colonnade of candles..and petals of wisteria  ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. -Ziggy [This message has been edited by Victoria (01-23-2002 12:28 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill, Grateful am I that I dropped into Passions this afternoon to read this wonderful piece. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Makes me want to go for a hike in the forest...James |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill~ NOT a glass heart...they break....sigh....hauntingly sad....but so wonderfully done... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You are Pan! You are Poetry!...a ~sigh~ piece Bill. Sincerely, Regina |
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