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RosePetal
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0 posted 2002-01-22 10:34 PM


Last night you told me about a drug
Four letters, it's called love
I realized It's got me hooked
And I can't get enough

Your right, no matter how much you have
You always want more
An ongoing dependency of your love drug
It's what I'm feinin for

When you give it to me
I feel as though I can fly
No need for stimulants
Your symptoms give the best kind of high

I can't settle for any other drug
Since none come close
I can indulge in your love drug all day
Without worrying about overdose

Your side effects feel incredibly good
They never wear off
This drug has to be earned
It cannot be bought

Therefore, love drug has no street value
So you won't find it on a price list
If your lucky enough to obtain some
Treasure it, for it is priceless

What else can it do?
It can make you the happiest person alive
Or it could slowly kill you
Eating at you inside

If it gets a hold of you
You might do things
you normally wouldnt do
It can discard your inhibitions
and make you try something new
I don't need rehab
I love the cravings I get for you

Be careful, this drug can harm people
It has no warning label
Though it is not illegal

I can't stop at one dose
Still can't stop at two
This is the love drug
that has me addicted to you

© Copyright 2002 Joanna - All Rights Reserved
Jesse Jaymz
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1 posted 2002-01-22 10:44 PM


i like this one   good job hun.  i loved this part

What else can it do?
It can make you the happiest person alive
Or it could slowly kill you
Eating at you inside

i know this pain allllll to well.  and know that high allllll to well.  nice work.  *hugs*

love ya
jesse

So tonight I'll ask
The stars above
"How can I ever win your love?"
What can I do,
What can I say
To turn your angel eyes my way...

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-01-22 11:20 PM




(KISS ON LIPS) Ooohhhhhhh...I love it, I love it, sweet friend, your love is always such an addiction to me, I can't tell you how many times to say I LOVE YOU!!! (kiss on lips) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love you sooooooo much! (kisses) You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ecrivan
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3 posted 2002-01-22 11:26 PM


love drugs..we have our own endorphins so why bother with the substitutes..charming words


Startime
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4 posted 2002-01-22 11:32 PM


*giggling* oh how true it is....Love is truly the Drug of choice... at least it is for me...Well done...I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2002-01-23 01:24 AM


RosePetal - whom ever this is for, how can he resist these words? Wish you well...

BC

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6 posted 2002-01-23 10:29 AM


Oh rose petal,, now this is the only drug I approve of. Lots and lots of it. great write.

Floria
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7 posted 2002-01-23 10:34 AM


this is a wonderful write Joanna..loved it..love is addicting isnt it?..enjoyed

             ~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

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8 posted 2002-01-23 06:25 PM


Oh Joanna this is so beautifully written.  ANd you are 100% correct, it is a drug, a drug which can kill, and also a drug to bring happiness.  Whichever the case, love is a very addictive drug, as many of us know.  Great job Joanna, I lovedd it.

    From your friend
       Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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9 posted 2002-01-23 06:54 PM


Joanna~

It is a drug, and no matter how we sometimes try....it always pulls us back....thanks for the repost, so glad I got to read this...   hugs


Lauren~


Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-23-2002 07:55 PM).]

DayDreamer99
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10 posted 2002-01-23 07:17 PM


such a true poem Love the best kind of drug

I can't stop at one dose
Still can't stop at two
This is the love drug
that has me addicted to you


Thats mah favorite part
Tifferz *huggs*

Morcastlin
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11 posted 2002-01-23 07:46 PM


How true! Love is a major drug! The higs and lows are as real as that from any illegal substance. Excellent writing!

Love,
Bonnie

RosePetal
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12 posted 2002-01-23 07:55 PM


Thank you to everyone who replied! I reposted this because the first time around it was only read by three people
Glad it brought enjoyment to you all.

love,
RosePetal

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