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Symphony of Love |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Florias poem today about a violin made me think of this one from 1998 *Symphony of Love* In the night, the wind, sings in the shadows The blanket of your love, surrounds my soul A windsong in the dark, portrays a piccolo Serenading our song, my lonely heart tolls The whispering willows, graceful branches Lazily dance, in the midnight breeze Consuming thoughts, flow like an avalanche As thoughts of you, begin to please The violin of your heart, and the bow of mine Making love to each other, composing our song United in rhapsody, of ecstasy divine The strings of your heart, is where I belong The heartbeat of the night, our love is complete I am all yours, your symphony my sweet c.5/98/Victoria You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And this too is a good one Victoria... You are a very talented poetess... |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
This is lovely, Victoria. Thanks for sharing it.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The violin of your heart, and the bow of mine It's all about keeping the rhythm. Loved the harmony and the melody Victoria~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Victoria~This is beautiful! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Barry..it seems like so long ago when i wrote this.. thank you newell...glad you enjoyed thank you Ms.Serenade..yes i think you are right..and keeping in tune with one another thank you Nancy..appreciate your nice comments |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Another beautiful song, Victoria... So completely satisfying. Hugz, Pepper |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Consuming thoughts..I remember when that use to be all... time doesn't stop for anyone does it ~V~..not even for beautiful memories of the real to last long enough. M |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oooohhhhhh...this is soooooooo lovely, sweet friend, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) You strum the heartstrings beautifully with the music your words play, may he forever bring happiness to your heart and strum the bow of trust and pure love to your heart! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a symphony of enchantment! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Pepper..appreciate you nice comments M..thank you Maureen..time heals everything eventually.. Noah..thank you dear one hugss glad you enjoyed |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is simply beautiful Victoria, I am thrilled that I inspired you. Floria |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you floria..yes your poem brought back some bittersweet memories...hugs vandana..thank you for peeking in today |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~V~ This reminds me of summer, and the breeze, and listening to the music on the beach.... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-24-2002 08:46 AM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Lauren..i wish i were sitting on a beach somewhere...sounds lovely |
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