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Zinsser
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0 posted 2002-01-22 07:07 PM



Freedom Together

Could be the time of our lives
I know with honesty I'll be alright
Life is funny don't you think
New beginnings from the depths of stink

Life and love to rebuild anew
No hidden bits of me and you
True freedom of choice has brought us here
No reason to hide things out of fear

The thing I fear is hidden feelings
No room for that now, would bebad dealings
Can't think of anything worse then dieing when old
With should haves, what ifs, and I should have told's

By
Constance McDonald
Copyright@2001
Monday, May 21, 2001
9:15AM



© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-22 07:37 PM




(sigh) Sooooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all who live with burdens and regrets deep in their hearts and I pray with all my heart they can express themselves and find freedom and solace in result! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is such a powerful perspective! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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