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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-01-22 03:43 PM



Doesn't Get More Perfect Than This

~*Marge Tindal*~

Wrapped in a fluttering sigh of tenderness
I gather thoughts to vocalize my heart
'Tell me how can I be more of all you'll ever want?'
Before they culminate you whisper~
"I wouldn't trade you for anything in this world."
"Please love me for always."


Doesn't get more perfect than this~


Bill, I love you~
Thank you for all you do and say~

January 20, 2002


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2002-01-22 04:07 PM


this is a sigh waiting to happen...
Margie...its wonderful to see you so content and happy...makes me believe in happy endings.
Lovely write of heart.

I'm like a broken record that you can play ...
Repeating (as if it matters)... everything I say.

Gin Blossoms

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2 posted 2002-01-22 04:48 PM


"I wouldn't trade you for anything in this world."
"Please love me for always."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ahhh, you are one lucky lady Marge!
Nice to see you so much in love.
~Hugs, Nancy!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-01-22 04:52 PM


Marge,
Couldn't be happier about your happy.

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2002-01-22 04:57 PM


'Tell me how can I be more of all you'll ever want?'

Reading of lovers in love is the next best thing.  
This one tugged at my heartstrings,
and I'm awful happy for you.

Logan
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5 posted 2002-01-22 04:57 PM


Well, Little Goose, it might..so hold your breath...very gentle smile
SmartChick
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6 posted 2002-01-22 05:46 PM


Marge, I am so happy, that you are so happy. And, that you have found someone to love and who loves you, too.
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2002-01-22 05:59 PM


JanetMarie~
Thanks, hon~
I *sigh* with discovery~

Enchantress~
Thankee, gal~

Seymour~
You know that matters to me ... thank you~

BluesSerenade~
I appreciate the read and the lovely reply~

Logan~
~*LittleGoose*~ *smiles*
But ... but ... I'll turn blue...
and then I'd be your ~*LittleBlueGoose*~
with ~*LittleBlueGooseyBumps*~

SmartChick~
To love another is the easiest thing to do .. HEAVENLY~
To receive love is a trasure beyond compare~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2002-01-22 06:08 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my heart this is sooooooooo incredibly beautiful. I am never disappointed by the artistry and wonder you craft into your poems and this is outstandingly good

YOU are wonderful do you know that? Well you are

You know that this is utterly fabulous don’t you, the flow is just perfect


Its wonderful to see you soooooooo happy and content
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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9 posted 2002-01-22 06:16 PM


Marge...even a blind man...without braille
can tell that you are deeply in love...your
words capture it...

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2002-01-22 06:27 PM


MarshaLove~
Awwwwwww ... you say the nicest things~
*hugs* from my heart gal~

Magnus~
Shucks ... it's that obvious, huh ?
Tee-Hee .... GOOD~
Believe me, it's the glow from another that lights up my life~
Thank you again~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2002-01-22 07:30 PM


Marge, how happy you sound, and I am so happy for you. floria
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