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Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you

0 posted 2002-01-22 03:23 PM


Though stars may twinkle
And suns may blaze,
I'd rather look at you.
Though works of art
May find my gaze,
I'd rather look at you.

Though trees of green
May bend and sway,
I'd rather look at you.
Though waves may crash
Upon the bay,
I'd rather look at you.

For eyes do twinkle
And lips do blaze
When I look at you.
A work of art
Enters my gaze
When I look at you.

Then let my eyes
Touch your soul
When I look at you.
For you're the one
That makes me whole
When I look at you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

© Copyright 2002 Moonlight Romeo - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-22 03:27 PM


I certainly think you would need a picture in order to look that long, Sir! I hope you have one!
This is lovely, Sweet Romeo. Your presence is a treat as always.

Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-01-22 03:53 PM


Romeo,
You may look as long as you wish...
If inspired to pen words like this.
Wonderfully romantic!  Enjoyed.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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3 posted 2002-01-22 04:43 PM


Dear Sir,
It is amazing that one could be so wrapped up in another, but it is a truly wonderful and life altering thing is it not?

I've waited for more of your words here, and when I find them, I put them away in the secret places where I keep such treasures.

My heart, that is. But I'm certain you knew that already,

Lovely from you, Dear Romeo.

I am many.

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2002-01-22 05:27 PM


Romeo, Romeo you have such a way with words.     
How  wonderfully sweet it is~

Moonlight Romeo
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5 posted 2002-01-23 01:15 PM


Thank you ladies, I'm happy that you have enjoyed this.

And Siofra, I know.  

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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