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walker
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0 posted 2002-01-22 07:51 AM



I wanted to
love you so bad
last night
I was so lonely
You were but
a whispher away
I was too proud
to invite you
for a kiss
so instead I
stayed awake
thinking of you
and love's memories

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-01-22 07:55 AM


beautiful *s

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2 posted 2002-01-22 08:42 AM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautifully dreamy, sweet friend, I know just how you feel and I always love to just stay awake for a little while daydreaming of my dream girl rose before I go to sleep and dream of her on and on happily! (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you are soooooo romantic, we all love you so much, may his whispers of love forever kiss your heart and fill you with loves joy! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-22-2002 08:43 AM).]

Duncan
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3 posted 2002-01-22 11:57 AM


Sounds like a long, sad night, walker.
EagleScorpion
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4 posted 2002-01-22 12:22 PM


hmmm... well at least you'd see him in the morning! I hope you guys are happy together.
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5 posted 2002-01-22 12:43 PM


Very nice piece. Filled with longing and it reminds me of being so stubborn, you didn't want to be the one to make the first move. So you both lie there awake, pretending to be asleep. Enjoyed. Cheyrl
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just out of reach
6 posted 2002-01-22 01:14 PM


walker - ahhh, the missed chances!! Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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