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Psalms 25: 16
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Psalms 25: 16 |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Psalms 25: 16: Turn thee unto me, and have mercy upon me; for I am desolate and afflicted. (KJV) I’m battered, I’ve been beaten and I’m bruised, Have mercy Have pity upon my body abused desolate with no fate, Let kindness face to my heart Then take me Remake me, Let me be your lesser part, I’m battered, Guide me so I might be used. Gloom Reworked response. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
"Therefore my heart is glad, and my glory rejoiceth: my flesh also shall rest in hope." KJV Psalms 16:9. Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
well.. we should pray to hope you get better..this is a good prayer |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Silver Streak, I do prefer the King James, it’s the one I grew up with. Thank you, EagleScorpion, Glad you liked it, just a bit of inspiration from the Bible. I am as well as I ever am, but thank you for the concern. Gloom |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Its great to see you here, and somehow wonderful to see this kind of work from you. I love it and your presence, friend.  |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Gloom, I do like this one. Soul searching is good for us and God can do remarkable things, can He not? He remakes me daily, thank goodness. Enjoyed. Cheryl |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gloom, this is very well done, and I too prefer the King James version. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is a comfort today. Thank you, PG. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Prof, Great write! I really like the sentiments you expressed here. Thanks. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Such beautiful sentiments and compassion fills your words, sweet friend, I too enjoy the King James version very much too! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
very good... : ) |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
The attractions of this world, the delights of wealth, and the search for sucess and the lure of nice things come in and crowd out God. Mark 4:19 this is my new favorte verse...good to see the scriptures in poety [This message has been edited by Lorelei54 (01-22-2002 04:36 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Hi Gloom! I grew up with the King James Version, also. Only went to the New International Version in the last year. My younger brother, a loving though ruthless, brutal pentecostal minister convinced me after many long hours of touch discussions and argument, that the King James Version did have a few additions that were not in the original Hebrew and Greek. And modern scholars will quickly show that the translations are a bit more accurate. So after much soul searching, I decided to follow purity as I understand it. But I encourage everyone to read the Word, in whatever version that God puts on your heart. Just read it!! It is the Holy Spirit, in careful reading of the Scripture, not man's translation, that makes understanding of God's Will complete and accurate. Go for it! -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (01-22-2002 07:27 PM).] |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Gloom how wonderful to be reminded that all we need do is turn to Him, it is just that simple. thanks for this. floria |
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