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Duncan
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0 posted 2002-01-22 01:59 AM




I thought to be with you tonight
on a dance floor strewn with leaves
gathered at Tara
I thought to whisper words tonight
of love danced noisily about
but rarely spoken
I thought to be myself tonight
wrapped in your arms of halcyon
I am there

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2002-01-22 02:00 AM


This is beautiful, absolutely beautiful.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2002-01-22 02:19 AM


To be immersed in the music
To sing and dance as if no one's around.
To write the words to a love song.

Nice~

  


Tracey
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3 posted 2002-01-22 04:11 AM


Hey you...I’m at Tara now...and where are you??...Seriously...what can I say Dunc? Beautiful,...sighing. If this is what happens when a girl falls asleep, then I think maybe I shall have to try that more often!! Just kidding...love this, and more.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

walker
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4 posted 2002-01-22 07:45 AM


You are such a romantic, I love your poem.
nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2002-01-22 07:58 AM


very calming, comforting *s

M

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6 posted 2002-01-22 08:35 AM




(sigh) Soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, such beauty fills your words and has the heart singing with halcyon love! (big hugggsssss) May true loves happiness forever fill your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is a true gem of poetic beauty! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-01-22 08:48 AM


Ahhh, romance at its finest.
Sandra

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8 posted 2002-01-22 01:51 PM


Don't mind me, my friend. I'm just sitting here sighing all over your poem!
Wonderful!


Robert A
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9 posted 2002-01-22 03:12 PM


liked this, the word caught my eye. I like interesting words.

Robert

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10 posted 2002-01-22 03:18 PM


I thought to be with you tonight
on a dance floor strewn with leaves
gathered at Tara
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Duncan, I read this and immediately 'Tara's Theme' from "Gone With The Wind" started playing over and over in my mind.....and I am getting dizzy from waltzing with you...but don't want to stop as I am loving it so.....
      ~Warm hugs for this one! Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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