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My Madness
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My Madness |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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In my sadness~ I want so much to feel, buried in a timeless treasure locked in silent tears of grief. In my madness~ I waver in the reason, unrestrained; I spin my thoughts around incapable of being, unexplained. On your wings I fly so high with each and every mood swing. Like the ever changing winds plummeting towards the ground. In my gladness~ I share your smile in mind the sparkle in your eyes stirs me up deep down inside. Never will you ever be the ending of my world. nor the wanting for the reasons to which I have succumbed; For all that you have made of me I have willingly become. In my sadness, in my madness, in my gladness in my anguish You evoke..... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
BluesSerenade, "On your wings I fly so high" May you never hit the ground!  |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
Beautiful ... it's always a thing of wonder to find the one who stirs every emotion in the spectrum inside of you. ~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm not about to crash and burn, but the high only lasts so long. I'm so glad you stopped by to read! Thank you Larry~ C~ DarkAngelChelle~ It is a wonder how one person runs the gamut on our emotions. I'm certainly not complaining, just putting my madness into words. Thank you for your nice reply. [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (01-22-2002 01:52 AM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Enjoyed Mr.Serenade and love the new picture too.. ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Exactly...and I agree with ~V~ *w (about the pic) Maureen |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Soooooooo beautifully expressed, sweet friend, may you forever find true happiness, peace, and comfort who you share this spectrum of emotions with! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-22-2002 09:49 AM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!! You were able to capture this kind of madness very well...Great poem. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BluesSerenade~ Enjoyed the truths in this writing~ 'For all that you have made of me I have willingly become.' *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Never will you ever be the ending of my world. nor the wanting for the reasons to which I have succumbed; For all that you have made of me I have willingly become. It's easy to love the roller coaster when you're still on top. Great write! |
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OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
who dat hot blondie chick? or is that sexy white hair like mine (grin) dug it ms B....some gentle and sticky both in this one |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is wonderful! Thoroughly enjoyed today and I love the pic as well. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Victoria~ It is always so good to hear from you. I thought the blue background on the blue pages would make a real fashion statement, but I still can't see it! nt~ I'm glad you came by to read and thank you for your nice comments. My computer is going haywire so we're not seeing it the same. But that side of chub had to go, except it's still starring me in the face. Oh boy, it's my lucky day, some things never change. Hugs~ Noah~ Thank you for everything, you are always so gracious with your replies, and I appreciate them very much. Startime~ I'm so happy you came by to read. I just write what I'm feeling and at the time I was going half mad! So I did my best to capture it. Dear Marge~ Thank you for picking up on that line. I learned a long time ago that no one is responsible for the choices we make in our lives. *Hugs* to you too and thanks again. Duncan~ Yes yes yes, you've got the right idea. What a great response, I do thank you for that. Maybe I am not going mad after all! OWG~ You are too funny! I don't do gray and I used to despise the term 'dishwater blonde' only my hairdresser knows for sure. Nice of you stop by. Thanks Nancy~ Thank you very much. It's a mad mad world out there, but I've never thought for a minute that I couldn't cope. I can do it, I can do it!! |
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