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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-01-21 10:25 PM




Firelight Fairytales
By: Noah Eaton
1/21/02

Through the long lonely winter you comfort me
How you hold me down and feel your heart beat with mine
In just one kiss you ignite the child within me
As the bright watermelon flame burns with a passion so divine

I cry, but not in sadness, but in rapture
Now that I have fallen in love with you
How I never thought I’d find someone so heavenly
Your heart brings rainbows to the stars and spreads lilac perfume

I breathe deeply between each kiss, trying to find the words
To say to you, my love, but deep down I can sacrifice all but three
To show you how much I love you, how you make my heart dance
How you take my breath away, kissing you as the fire’s sizzling

Every time I hold you, stroking your caramel hair
I can hear your heart whisper, melting softly with mine in bliss
And I cry, staring at a star, now knowing dreams can come true
As my heart melts with yours happily, in our sexy firelight kiss

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-21-2002 10:26 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-01-21 10:33 PM


Ah sweet Noah, you write of passions so strong it melts this lady's heart.....
I am sure I  know what it must be doing to your Joanna!!  This is beautiful, sensual and very well done!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love is the realization of a beautiful dream~

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2 posted 2002-01-21 10:34 PM


such a wonderful heart you have Noah....
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3 posted 2002-01-21 10:35 PM


Nothing like love to bring out the child in us, and nothing at all like the joy that comes from that.  This is entirely a heart being written on a sleeve
Noah, there should be about a thousand more just like you you know?

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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4 posted 2002-01-21 10:36 PM


Noah- You really captured the intense feeling of love and passion in this one.  Very good.

Dave

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5 posted 2002-01-21 10:37 PM


Noah you write so beautifully of love, this is another wonderful poem. floria
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6 posted 2002-01-21 10:53 PM


Noah, I'd say you have an infestation of love bugs in your house and they're biting you unmercifully! Keep writing, my friend. Your words are music....
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7 posted 2002-01-21 11:00 PM


NOAH~

I can only sigh right now, because if I say more I will cry.....so tender, so emotional....thank you....


Lauren~


Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-21-2002 11:00 PM).]

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8 posted 2002-01-21 11:17 PM


*sigh* Noah you write love with such magic...that visions flow constantly...beautiful...simply beautiful. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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9 posted 2002-01-22 09:02 AM


What do you think,Noah? Do fairytales ever come true?
This is wonderful.
Sandra

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10 posted 2002-01-22 09:07 AM


Tender and Sweet Noah..loved it hon..as always...hugss..

           ~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

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11 posted 2002-01-22 10:42 AM


Noah, are you sure you are only 18?  

You are writing with such tenderness...
*s
Maureen

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12 posted 2002-01-22 12:21 PM


this is so beautiful. I felt great passion in your words.

Ain't nothin like it!

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13 posted 2002-01-22 02:01 PM


How beautifully you write of love and longing. Wonderful, magical words that stir the heart. Whomever is lucky enough to capture your heart will have a treasure. Cheryl
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14 posted 2002-01-22 02:28 PM


baby this is so romantic! You write so beautifully, sometimes I have to remind myself that you are my age!
If I could, I would bring all your fairytales to life.

RP

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