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A Way With You
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A Way With You |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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I can not sing a song it always comes out wrong but you ... your words are true can I sing a way with you All I can do is run it really is not fun and you ... you do it too can I run a way with you All I want, peace of mind something so hard to find in you ... I find, you knew I could find a way with you I do not know of Love I do know nothing of but you ... your heart is true I could love a way with you. [This message has been edited by ctowen (01-22-2002 12:21 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Craig, nice....a tidbit of romance, with some yearning and a little bit of anxiousness thrown in...Message pretty clear to me.. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thank you Barry ... I am curious though, which message did you see? I tried to write this from all the "new" relationships I have seen blooming this past weekend. Love is an amazing flower!! [This message has been edited by ctowen (01-21-2002 08:32 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I do know nothing of but you ... your heart is true I could love a way with you and you have.."a way" with words tonight.. love it M "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Craig...the message was just the effect of the poem...nothing else...I try not to keep track of the relationships too much... Too many of them to watch.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, love will always find a way and I know deep down you will be showered by eternal love! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, it too always makes me smile to see love develop over so many people everyday! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Maureen, so good to see you back ... some say I am a bit "way-ward" at times. *s Barry, I do so know what you mean ... Maybe someday I will have one of my own. And then, maybe, I will know more than nothing! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thanks Noah, love developes only on the odd days ... on the even days I shower!!! May love find a way for you as well. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hmmm, and today is an odd day!!  Well I'll be!! This is very good, and I much enjoyed tonight! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love is the realization of a beautiful dream~ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Imagine that ... today is an odd day!! That means I will be a little wet behind the ears sometime tomorrow. lol I am glad you enjoyed, I shall do my best to please as always. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
If wearing love will be like this....so good to see you may be finding your way to happy.... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-23-2002 08:24 AM).] |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This sounds like the beginning of a beautiful romance. Singing with someone, running away with someone...and I like the way you put the last line “I could love a way with you”. By the way, today’s an even day...did ya shower then???  If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* soft and romantic...a call from the heart.. *giggling* you will have romance, my friend, and when you do look out blue pages...they will flame with your love. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I actually like the structure here with each stanza have a reference to your love, nicely said |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Lauren - You are what you wear and if LOVE is in fashion, I hope it makes a trend!! I do so look forward to each and every hug. Tracey - I went to a party this weekend and witnessed some amazing things. I saw atractions between some pretty opposite personalities and found myself writing this. I saw people who run from it, people who question its purpose, people who sing its praise and people who have no idea what "it" is, all coming together .... opposites really do attract!!! As for the shower .... it was an even day and I have wet ears to prove it!! ( and may I add Duncan is a very lucky guy ) Karen - What can I say but "flame on"!! Ecrivan - Thank you for commenting, it seemed best to express these words from what I saw in all their eyes than from my own ... I guess that would make it fourth, fifth, sixth, and seventh person points of view. A little LOVE can go a long, long way. Vandana - so happy you stopped by and commented. Thank You! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Craig Your words flow so beautifully like a tranquil stream, I always enjoy what I read of yours....beautiful! Take care....Sue Suetang |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I like the way you rhyme craig, just beautiful! (hugs) RP |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I think you sing very sweetly...enjoyed listening! |
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