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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Come…stand before me look deep within and tell me what you see Do you see what lies in my heart? The caring I feel for mankind, yes the very same mankind that uses and hurts… Do you see the tearstains on yesterday’s pillow? The hope for tomorrow? Is my desire for passion unlike any other’s? Is it unlike... your’s? Can you see the warm glow reaching, reaching… For what? I am not quite sure. A cold heart it seems, it must be that, for that is what it always finds. Have your eyes spied the child playing hide n seek? She’s there, if you look deeper. Oh, they have tried to beat her out of me, but… children are resilient, and she knows her home. Come…look inside, tell me what you see…. 01-21-02 ever deep...runs the wishing well for fairytale illusions [This message has been edited by A Whisper's Caress (01-21-2002 09:59 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Can you see the warm glow reaching, reaching… For what? I am not quite sure. A cold heart it seems, it must be that, for that is what it always finds. beautifully written..and felt Annie hugss M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-21-2002 08:48 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, deep inside of your heart write the words of love and compassion from your loving soul! (kiss on cheek) May the child inside of you always laugh and smile and may you write of joy forever! We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Annie...a ton of feelings lies here inside this poem...of a little girl....who I think might now be grown... This poem says a lot... |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
thank you, each of you, for the gracious comments. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Enjoyed Annie..nice to read your words again hugss~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Something tells me it wouldn't be make believe... |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Annie, this is a sad but beautifully written piece about the inner child in all of us. May the little child never cease to be. I enjoyed this immensely. Cheryl |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Annie, I wish society would allow for us all to let our inner child out more often. We have become a very uncaring world, cold and fast paced, not always taking the time to see a person on the inside. Dawn |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
A Whisper's Caress~ Hauntingly beautiful, and really hit home....you have written with great emotion and much power....  Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Annie, so so much feelings expressed here, very nice. Floria |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
the inside of the outside lovely thick in thin transparent |
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