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Ladyhawke
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0 posted 2002-01-21 07:20 PM


Months of lament
Have muted my voice
I am blocked
With fresh walls,
Walls of wet sand
Of sod
They are the dam
That creates the lake
That grows ever
Deeper within me.

Should I find my
Speech, I would find
Those words.
I have, before, fallen
Into pitfalls by
Vocalization shoveled.
What I would say,
Could I find the words...

They would come with colors.

© Copyright 2002 Ladyhawke - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2002-01-21 07:28 PM


I like this, Ladyhawke, I like this a lot.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

WRBreezin
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since 2001-08-04
Posts 212

2 posted 2002-01-21 07:31 PM



  Your words are wealthy in the soul's seeking...greatly enjoyed.

Robert Joseph

vandana
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3 posted 2002-01-21 07:42 PM


enjoyed it a lot
Startime
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4 posted 2002-01-21 07:43 PM


WOW!!!!There are words behind the words of this poem...written with very strong emotions. Very powerful. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-01-21 09:00 PM




(sigh) Such search of truth and emotion shines in these words, sweet friend, you will find these words and they will shine with colors of joy and promise! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ladyhawke, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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