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J. K. Mitchell
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0 posted 2002-01-21 06:24 PM


I'm not the prettiest
Smartest, most confident woman around
But I hold inside me one simple truth
No one can love you like I do
I'm not a cheat, a liar
Or even a thief
But still I can give you the most valuable thing in your world...me
I'm saying all this just to give you a chance
To embark upon the greatest romance
And to let you know
No one will love you like I can
I'm not a woman who  cries, begs, or pleads
But I am a woman with needs
Needs only you can fill
Knowing no one can love me like you will
So I reach out my hand
I extend an invitation
Taste my love
The greatest in all creation
You won't be disappointed
In fact you'll be pleased
That out of all the women in the world
You gave your love to me

© Copyright 2002 Jacqueline Mitchell - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-01-21 06:47 PM


a great invite..now to only  get the response from one who deserves you.*s

nice thoughts

M

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

Startime
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2 posted 2002-01-21 06:58 PM


Oh my gosh...you should surely get the response you are looking for. What man would want an invitation like this. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

DonFurr
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3 posted 2002-01-21 07:02 PM


If he were to fail to see the depth of your love, then he fails in the thing to be most cherished.
Keep writing you are among peers.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-01-21 08:08 PM


WOW J.K., I love this....the feeling you project is perfect here.  I hope whomever this is for sees it and realizes what he is getting!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love is the realization of a beautiful dream~

Magnus
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5 posted 2002-01-21 08:14 PM


Jk...beauty is many things...most of which
are not above the surface...to be seen...I
sense that you posess great beauty and a
lot of love that would certainly please most
any man....I hope HE realizes that too...

Irish Rose
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6 posted 2002-01-21 08:17 PM


WOW
I hereby call you Warrior Woman, there are a few of us
here and you will begin to see how beautiful you really are

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2002-01-21 09:07 PM




(smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, that's right, you are a very loving and beautiful person and he will always be so lucky to be invited to share your loving heart with forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet J.K, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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