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Open Poetry #18

With Words

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-01-21 06:20 PM

With what words
Could I use to gently sway,
To tell you,
To warn you,
Of the hazards in the way.
With what sounds
Would be found
To allow to safely be
No constrains,
No complaints,
What words used would let you free
Let me know
I’ll say them before you go.

Gloom

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

1 posted 2002-01-21 07:00 PM

Your words could be taken a million different ways.

I really like that.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2002-01-21 09:06 PM

smiling here, just TRY to tell someone the "sky is falling"....sigh...this is beautiful and full of caring! I like this side of you, still sad, but thoughtful!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-01-21 09:15 PM

Professor, I like this kinder gentler side of you. Enjoyed the read and the thoughts it left me pondering tonight.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love is the realization of a beautiful dream~

mauddib
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 119
melbourne australia

4 posted 2002-01-21 10:35 PM

not so gloomy after all,
quite quaint,
the girls will love it.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-01-21 10:53 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo beautifully tender and sensitive, sweet friend, may you always find the right words to say and find the way to all your dreams and happiness with them by your side! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-01-21 10:54 PM

This was very tender and sad, very nice Gloom. floria

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

7 posted 2002-01-22 05:06 AM

Thank you, All
I appreciate you taking the time to comment
On my humble words.

Gloom

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